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十一、概要写作 书面表达。(5 分)
《英语学习报》将举办以“My happy family”为主题的演讲比赛,请你根据表格信息及英文提示帮丁辉写一篇演讲稿。要求:语句通顺,符合逻辑,语法正确,不少于5 句话(开头部分已给出,不计入总句数)。

Hello,everyone. My name is Ding Hui. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are
my father, my mother and me. My father is a cook. He is 37. He works in a nice restaurant. He drives a car to work. My mother is a teacher. She's 36. She teaches Chinese. She goes to work by bus. I am a student. I'm 12 years old. I go to school by metro. We are happy every day!

答案:Hello, everyone. My name is Ding Hui. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a cook. He is 37. He works in a nice restaurant. He drives a car to work. My mother is a teacher. She's 36. She teaches Chinese. She goes to work by bus. I am a student. I'm 12 years old. I go to school by metro. We are happy every day!
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确写作要求:主题是“My happy family”,需要完全覆盖表格给出的三位家庭成员的身份、年龄、出行方式信息,不少于5句话,语句通顺语法正确。解题思路可以按以下步骤走:1. 先承接题目给出的开头,补全空缺部分,点明家里的三个成员是爸爸、妈妈和自己;2. 按照从长辈到自己的顺序,依次分别介绍每位家人的职业、年龄,还可以补充少量符合人物身份的合理细节让内容更自然,之后再对应写出每个人的日常出行方式;3. 最后收尾点题,表达一家人生活幸福,呼应主题。全程使用介绍日常情况的一般现在时,保证人称和谓语动词搭配正确,不要生硬堆砌信息,让语句连贯流畅即可。
【解析】
1. 承接开头空缺,先明确介绍三位家庭成员:They are my father, my mother and me.
2. 介绍父亲的相关信息:依次说明职业、年龄、补充合理的工作场景、出行方式:My father is a cook. He is 37. He works in a nice restaurant. He drives a car to work.
3. 介绍母亲的相关信息:依次说明职业、年龄、补充合理的工作内容、出行方式:My mother is a teacher. She's 36. She teaches Chinese. She goes to work by bus.
4. 介绍自己的相关信息:说明身份、年龄、出行方式:I am a student. I'm 12 years old. I go to school by metro.
5. 最后收尾点题,呼应“幸福家庭”的主题:We are happy every day!
整体所有核心信息都来自表格,补充的细节符合人物逻辑,总句数远多于5句,语法全部正确,符合演讲稿的表达要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. My name is Ding Hui. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a cook. He is 37. He works in a nice restaurant. He drives a car to work. My mother is a teacher. She's 36. She teaches Chinese. She goes to work by bus. I am a student. I'm 12 years old. I go to school by metro. We are happy every day!
【知识点】
家庭主题写作
一般现在时
出行方式表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的表格提示类书面表达,难度较低,只需要学生有序整合表格给出的全部核心信息,适当补充少量符合逻辑的细节,就能写出符合要求的短文,主要考察学生对基础英语句式的运用能力和信息组织能力,写作时注意不要遗漏任意一位人物的职业、年龄、出行方式信息,保证主谓搭配正确即可拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
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