十二、读后续写 根据 Little Peter 的问诊记录单,用英语写一段话描述他的情况,并给出建议。(5 分)

Seeing a doctor
Peter is a boy. He's 7 years old. Today he feels ill. What's the matter with him? He has a fever and a headache. His mother takes him to the hospital. The doctor checks him carefully, and says that he has a bad cold. He should take some medicine. He should drink some warm water. He should have a good rest at home too.
答案:Seeing a doctor
Peter is a boy. He's 7 years old. Today he feels ill. What's the matter with him? He has a fever and a headache. His mother takes him to the hospital. The doctor checks him carefully, and says that he has a bad cold. He should take some medicine. He should drink some warm water. He should have a good rest at home too.
解析:
【分析】
这道题属于基础英语情景写作题,解题时首先第一步先从给出的问诊记录单里逐一提取所有明确给出的信息:患者姓名是Peter,性别为男性,年龄7岁,症状是头疼、发烧,初步诊断为重感冒。第二步先把这些提取到的信息按照逻辑顺序串联:先介绍Peter的基本身份,再说明他身体不适前往就医的背景,接着描述他的症状和医生给出的诊断结果,最后补充3条针对重感冒的合理日常建议,全程使用简单易懂的基础英语句式,保证没有语法错误,内容完整覆盖所有表格信息即可完成作答。
【解析】
1. 开篇先介绍人物基础信息:说明Peter是7岁的小男孩,当下身体不舒服,引出看医生的场景。
2. 接着描述症状与诊断:说明他头疼、发烧,医生检查后判断他得了重感冒,完整对应表格里的症状和诊断内容。
3. 最后补充三条符合常识的就医建议:写按时服药、多喝温水、在家充分休息,内容贴合病情,表达通顺自然即可。
最终将所有内容组织成连贯的通顺短文即可。
【答案】
Seeing a doctor
Peter is a boy. He's 7 years old. Today he feels ill. What's the matter with him? He has a fever and a headache. His mother takes him to the hospital. The doctor checks him carefully, and says that he has a bad cold. He should take some medicine. He should drink some warm water. He should have a good rest at home too.
【知识点】
情景英语写作;健康类词汇运用;一般现在时
【点评】
本题难度较低,核心考察学生的信息提取能力和基础英语短句组织能力,只需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部关键信息,补充符合病情的合理建议,保证语句通顺、没有基础语法错误就可以拿到满分,适合小学中高年级的英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.8