典型例题
阳光中学七年级(6)班有自己的网络论坛,在论坛上,大家可以畅所欲言。本周大家谈论的主题是"What can we do for our neighbourhood?",大家谈论了自己家所在街区的美好与不足,尤其是对卫生问题深表担忧。
假如你住在长江路上的城市花园小区,请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文参与讨论。要求涵盖以下三个要点:
1. What do you think of your neighbourhood?
2. What do you like and dislike about it?
3. What will you do to make it more beautiful?
参考词组:drop litter 乱扔垃圾
思路点拨
本篇文章的主题是谈论自己所在小区的美好与不足,并提出自己的看法,是夹叙夹议文。本文主要介绍自己对小区的看法以及自己的计划,所以应以第一人称为主;介绍小区的现状时应用一般现在时,介绍自己未来的计划时应用一般将来时。第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己对于小区喜欢和不喜欢的方面;第三段介绍自己计划为小区做什么。
范文欣赏
I live in City Garden on Changjiang Road. I
think our neighbourhood is modern and
wonderful.
There are supermarkets, restaurants, a
school and a hospital in it. People here are
helpful. I like living in a neighbourhood like
that, but I just think the place is a little dirty.
I think I can do something to help. I will
never drop litter everywhere, and I will clean up
the streets in my free time. I am sure if
everyone here does something for our
neighbourhood, it will be a more beautiful
place.