Ⅶ. (2024·无锡江阴期末)书面表达(26 分)
假如你是阳光中学的七年级学生李海,收到了英国朋友 Sam 的邮件。请仔细阅读邮件内容,并用英语回信。
注意事项:1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;3. 词数 70 左右,邮件首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email.
My hometown is Jiangyin. It's a beautiful city. I can visit many places of interest there like Zhongshan Park. I live in the north of Jiangyin. I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and listening to music.
I also like my community.
There are many trees and flowers in it. The people there are also friendly.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
答案：Ⅶ. One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email.
My hometown is Jiangyin. It's a beautiful city. I can visit many places of interest there like Zhongshan Park. I live in the north of Jiangyin. I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and listening to music. I also like my community. There are many trees and flowers in it. The people there are also friendly.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本题要求学生介绍自己的家乡等情况,应是一篇说明文。②时态:主要时态为一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,根据邮件内容,用英语回信,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用"很开心收到你的邮件"来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步,从"景点、地理位置以及那里的人们"等方面来介绍自己的家乡。第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点短语]
①places of interest 名胜古迹 ②look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and listening to music.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②There are many trees and flowers in it.(There be句型)
解析：
【分析】本题要求以李海的身份给英国朋友Sam写回信，需涵盖Sam邮件中提出的所有问题：家乡的情况、在家乡能做的事、家的位置、最喜欢的房间及在该房间做的事、对社区的看法。解题思路：确定体裁为英文书信，时态以一般现在时为主；依次回应每个问题，补充合理细节使内容连贯；注意词数要求，避免真实信息，使用简单通顺的英语表达。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头回应收到邮件，引出介绍内容；2. 介绍家乡：以江阴为例，说明其美丽，列举可游玩的景点如中山公园；3. 说明家的位置：在江阴北部；4. 介绍最喜欢的房间（卧室），说明在该房间可做的事（读书、玩游戏、听音乐）；5. 介绍社区：有树和花，居民友好；6. 结尾表达期待见面。使用亮点短语如places of interest、look forward to doing sth，运用高分句型如because引导的原因状语从句、There be句型，确保语句通顺，符合要求。
【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email.
My hometown is Jiangyin. It's a beautiful city. I can visit many places of interest there like Zhongshan Park. I live in the north of Jiangyin. I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and listening to music. I also like my community. There are many trees and flowers in it. The people there are also friendly.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时、话题写作（家乡与家）
【点评】本题为七年级期末书面表达题，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书信写作的能力，要求涵盖所有提示要点，内容连贯，难度适中，适合学生巩固相关写作技能。
【难度系数】0.5
