Ⅷ. 书面表达(21 分)
假如你参加了学校组织的动物保护社团,请以"My Animal Friend"为题,根据以下问题,写一篇短文分享你在社团中结识的动物朋友。
1. 词数不少于70;
2. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My Animal Friend
答案：Ⅷ. One possible version:
My Animal Friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
思路引导
［总体分析］
①体裁：本文要求学生写一篇文章介绍自己的动物朋友，应是一篇说明文；②时态：以一般现在时为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己的动物朋友是什么；第二步，描述动物的外貌特征、饮食习惯、活动以及特别之处；第三步，谈论自己的感受。
［亮点短语］
①a sense of... ……的感觉 ②be good at 擅长
［高分句型］
①It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me.（and连接并列句）
②When I come home from school, we always have fun together.（When引导时间状语从句）
解析：
【分析】
首先确定写作主题为介绍自己的动物朋友，需围绕题目给出的表格问题（是什么、外貌、饮食、活动、特别之处等）展开。选择常见的动物（如金毛寻回犬）作为写作对象，以一般现在时为主，先点明动物种类，再依次描述外貌特征、饮食习惯、日常活动与能力、特殊之处，最后表达与它相处的感受，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺连贯，词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点明动物朋友的种类，如“My animal friend is a golden retriever.”；2. 描述外貌，如“It has a soft, shiny coat and looks friendly.”；3. 说明饮食习惯，如“It eats dog food and some vegetables.”；4. 介绍日常活动与能力，如“It loves to play fetch and is good at learning new tricks.”；5. 阐述特别之处，如“It has a great sense of smell and is very loyal.”；6. 结尾表达感受，如“It makes me feel safe and happy.”。写作时需用连词（如and, when）衔接语句，运用亮点短语（如a sense of, be good at）提升表达，避免遗漏要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Animal Friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时运用、说明文写作
【点评】
本文围绕“我的动物朋友”展开，覆盖了题目要求的所有写作要点，时态准确，语言通顺连贯，运用了恰当的连词和亮点短语，结构清晰，情感真挚，符合初中英语书面表达的高分标准。
【难度系数】
0.5
