八、书面表达
学校英语报正在举行主题为“A charity I admire”的征文比赛，为需要帮助的人募集资金。请你选择一个你敬佩的慈善组织，写一篇文章参赛。文章须包含下方表格内所给要点，并进行适当发挥。90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
The charity I admire most is
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答案：One possible version:
The charity I admire most is Orbis. As an international charity, it aims to help blind people in poor areas. It treats people with eye problems and trains local doctors.
I once read a report on a blind boy. His life was difficult because he couldn't see anything. A doctor from Orbis came and operated on his eyes. This charity helped him get his sight back and completely changed his life. He is much happier now and can go to school.
I admire Orbis because it brings light to those who live in darkness. I think I can support Orbis by donating my pocket money.
解析：
【解析】
本题要求以“A charity I admire”为主题写征文，需围绕表格里的“慈善组织基本信息、主要工作、相关故事、敬佩原因、个人能做的事”这些要点展开创作，要保证内容连贯，语言符合英语表达习惯，词数控制在90词左右，开头已给出，需合理拓展完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
The charity I admire most is Orbis. As an international charity, it aims to help blind people in poor areas. It treats people with eye problems and trains local doctors.
I once read a report on a blind boy. His life was difficult because he couldn't see anything. A doctor from Orbis came and operated on his eyes. This charity helped him get his sight back and completely changed his life. He is much happier now and can go to school.
I admire Orbis because it brings light to those who live in darkness. I think I can support Orbis by donating my pocket money.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、慈善话题表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求要点，内容充实具体，故事有感染力，语言简洁地道，符合征文写作的要求，出色完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
