六、短文写作。
仔细阅读以下提示信息,然后写一封倡议书,号召学生和家长注意校门口附近的交通安全,不少于6句。

遵守红绿灯指令。
不在马路上奔跑或者玩耍。
走路要走人行道 (pavement)。
下雨天要小心。
Dear students and parents,
The road near the school gate is very busy in the morning. What can we do to keep safe?
1. Follow the traffic lights. _______
2. _______
3. _______
4. _______
Let's follow these rules to keep safe!
答案:六、示例: Dear students and parents,
The road near the school gate is very busy in the morning. What can we do to keep safe?
1. Follow the traffic lights. Wait for the green traffic light. Look left and right before you cross the road.
2. Don't run or play on the road. It's not safe.
3. Walk on the pavement. You should walk on the right side of the road.
4. Be careful on rainy days. You can take an umbrella in bright colours.
Let's follow these rules to keep safe!
解析:
【分析】
这是一道半开放的英文倡议书补全写作题,解题思路非常清晰:首先我们要对应题目给出的4条交通安全提示,顺着已经给出的开头句逐一补充内容。第一步,第一条已经给出“Follow the traffic lights”的开头,我们顺着遵守红绿灯的规则,补充等绿灯、过马路左右看这类符合常识的合理内容;第二步,第二条对应提示“不在马路上奔跑或者玩耍”,直接用否定祈使句写出规则,再补充说明该行为的危险性即可;第三步,第三条对应提示“走路要走人行道”,先点明要走人行道的要求,再补充靠右行走这类基础出行常识丰富内容;第四步,第四条对应提示“下雨天要小心”,先点明雨天要注意安全,再补充撑亮色雨伞这类贴合校门口场景的实用提示,整体凑够不少于6句的要求,保证语句通顺、符合倡议书面向家长和学生的语气就可以完成作答。
【解析】
1. 第一条内容补充:围绕遵守红绿灯的规则,补充两句细化通行要求的句子:Wait for the green traffic light. Look left and right before you cross the road. 明确了红绿灯场景下的正确操作,符合交通安全逻辑。
2. 第二条内容创作:对应“不在马路上奔跑或者玩耍”的提示,先写出禁止类规则Don't run or play on the road,再补充说明该行为的危险性It's not safe,表意清晰易懂。
3. 第三条内容创作:对应“走路要走人行道”的提示,先点明通行要求Walk on the pavement,再补充靠右行走的基础出行规则You should walk on the right side of the road,内容饱满合理。
4. 第四条内容创作:对应“下雨天要小心”的提示,先点明雨天出行注意事项Be careful on rainy days,再补充贴合校门口场景的实用提示You can take an umbrella in bright colours,让司机更容易注意到行人,细节非常贴合实际。
【答案】
Dear students and parents,
The road near the school gate is very busy in the morning. What can we do to keep safe?
1. Follow the traffic lights. Wait for the green traffic light. Look left and right before you cross the road.
2. Don't run or play on the road. It's not safe.
3. Walk on the pavement. You should walk on the right side of the road.
4. Be careful on rainy days. You can take an umbrella in bright colours.
Let's follow these rules to keep safe!
【知识点】
英文祈使句使用,交通安全主题写作,倡议书格式
【点评】
本题属于半限定的写作题型,不需要学生自主创作完整全文,只需要结合给定的中文提示补充对应通顺的英文句子即可,既考察了小学阶段基础祈使句的运用能力,也同时向学生科普了校门口出行的交通安全常识,作答容错率较高,只要内容贴合交通安全主题、语句语法正确都可以拿到对应分数。
【难度系数】
0.7