八、短文仿写。
学校正在举行“年度之星”评选,下面的范文是刘华同学的竞选演讲稿。仔细阅读范文,然后写一篇自己的竞选演讲稿,不少于 7 句。
I'm Liu Hua from Class 1, Grade 4. I'd like to be the Star of the Year.
I'm a good boy. First, I follow the rules at school and on the road. I wait for the green traffic light. Second, I care about my family and friends. When they're hungry, I share my food with them. Third, I'm helpful at home. My father is a doctor. My mother is a cook. They work hard and are very busy. I do many chores at home. I can sweep the floor and feed the dog. I can also wash vegetables and set the table.

This is me. Please vote for me.

I'm
. I want to be the Star of the Year.
First, I follow the rules at school and on the road.
Second, I care about my family and friends.
Third, I'm helpful at home.
This is me. Please vote for me.
解析:
【分析】
这道题是英语演讲稿仿写题,解题思路非常清晰:首先先参考给出的范文的固定结构,第一步先补全开头的自我介绍,说明自己的姓名和所在班级;第二步按照题目给出的三个核心要点(遵守校内外规则、关心家人朋友、在家乐于助人)依次补充对应的具体事例,每个要点都要像范文一样搭配贴合小学生日常的真实行为,保证语句通顺、积极正向,总句子数不少于7句,符合竞选“年度之星”的演讲稿语境即可。
【解析】
1. 补全开头自我介绍部分:按照范文的自我介绍格式,填写姓名+年级班级信息,即I'm Li Ming from Class 2, Grade 4.
2. 在第一条要点前补充总起句,对应范文里的"I'm a good boy",可以写I'm a good student. 总述自己的特质。
3. 给第一条“遵守校内外规则”补充具体行为示例,对应范文里等绿灯的例子,写I never run red lights. 符合规则要求。
4. 给第二条“关心家人朋友”补充具体事例,写When my friends are sad, I tell them funny stories. 体现自己对他人的关心。
5. 给第三条“在家乐于助人”依次补充内容:先说明父母的职业和日常状态My parents are teachers. They are very busy every day. 再列举自己常做的家务I often help them clean the windows and water the flowers. I can also make my bed and put away my toys. 整体内容连贯,完全贴合范文结构,句子数量满足不少于7句的要求。
【答案】
I'm Li Ming from Class 2, Grade 4. I want to be the Star of the Year.
I'm a good student. First, I follow the rules at school and on the road. I never run red lights. Second, I care about my family and friends. When my friends are sad, I tell them funny stories. Third, I'm helpful at home. My parents are teachers. They are very busy every day. I often help them clean the windows and water the flowers. I can also make my bed and put away my toys. This is me. Please vote for me.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作,情景交际表达,英语句子仿写
【点评】
本题考查小学阶段的英语仿写写作能力,不需要使用复杂的高级词汇,只需要参照给定范文的框架,结合自身的真实生活场景补充对应细节即可,难度较低,注意保证语句语法正确,要点清晰,内容积极贴合竞选主题就可以得到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7