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五、书面表达
假设你是李明,你的英国笔友杰克对中国古代历史十分感兴趣。他本想去西安参观兵马
俑,却因事务繁忙,无法亲自前往。请你根据下方流程图,写一封90词左右的邮件向他推荐兵
马俑的线上游览项目。开头和,数。

Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum in
person, I'd like to
recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.

I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta
Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
答案:Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum
in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's
Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确写作身份是李明,收信人是熟悉的英国笔友杰克,写作核心目的是向没空线下游览兵马俑的杰克推荐数字兵马俑线上项目。第一步先紧扣题干给出的开头,直接点明要推荐的项目,开门见山;第二步按照提示要点,先介绍兵马俑的基本概况:说清它的地理位置在陕西西安,核心特色是留存了数千件秦代的珍贵陶俑,是中国古代历史爱好者的必看景点;第三步接着介绍线上游览的功能和优势:说明它有高清3D影像、细节放大、配套历史讲解的功能,足不出户就能沉浸式游览,既省出行时间,还能看清线下参观容易忽略的展品细节;最后自然衔接题干给出的结尾,保证所有提示要点全部覆盖,语气亲切符合笔友通信的场景,词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇承接题干给出的开头句,直接引出推荐的核心项目:即数字兵马俑线上游览项目,完成第一个要点要求。
2. 补充兵马俑概况内容:明确其坐落于陕西西安,是中国秦代留存的珍贵历史遗存,拥有数千件形态各异的古陶俑,是历史爱好者的必打卡景点,覆盖位置、特色两个信息点。
3. 介绍线上游览的功能与优势:说明该项目提供高清3D影像、展品细节放大、配套趣味历史讲解的功能,能带来沉浸式的游览体验,不受出行时间、空间限制,比线下游览更方便,覆盖第三个要点。
4. 行文自然衔接题干给出的结尾句,整体逻辑连贯,用词贴合日常书信的亲切风格,所有要点无遗漏,词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文邮件写作,文化遗产介绍,要点式书面表达
【点评】
本题属于热点情境下的应用文写作,结合数字文保的新形式和中国传统文化兵马俑的背景,既考察学生的英语书面表达能力,也引导学生了解传统文化传播的新方式。写作提示给出了全部核心要点,学生只需要按照逻辑顺序串联要点,保证语言通顺、无语法错误,就能完成符合要求的作品,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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