【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“值得记住的一天”。
此话题的写作要求学生能用简洁的语言介绍
过去值得回忆的事情，学会用英语给他人发
电子邮件，讲述过去发生的事情，有效地提
高英语交际能力与表达能力。
【典例研析】
我们都有一些难忘的学校旅行。学校英
语报编辑部将组织以“Our School Trip”为
题的征文比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英文
写一篇短文与同学们分享你的旅行经历。
要点提示：
1. What did you do in one of your school
trips?
2. What do you think of the school trip?
3. What advice can you give to
make the school trip more meaningful?
写作要求：
1. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 词数70左右。
Our School Trip
The school trip is a great chance for us
to relax ourselves. And it is good for us to
talk with others.
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
中心：介绍一次学校旅行的经历以及提
出让旅行更有意义的建议。
第二步 谋篇
【范文欣赏】
续表
点评
①文章开篇说明学校旅行的意义。
②重点介绍作者与同学们在向阳公园的活
动，思路清晰，重点突出，语言精练。
③尾段中的“I advise”及“learn more
about science and develop their interest
in science”突显作者对下一次学校旅行
的期待，阐明了提出该建议的原因。
答案：Our School Trip
The school trip is a great chance for us to relax ourselves. And it is good for us to talk with others.
Last weekend, I went to the Xiangyang Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. We walked around and took photos in the morning. At noon we had a picnic in the park where we shared our food with each other. We played games after lunch under the tree. Our teacher also told us some interesting stories about the park. At 3:50 p.m., we went home. It was really an exciting trip!
I advise that we should visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about science and develop their interest in science.
解析：
本题是一篇话题作文，需围绕“Our School Trip”展开创作。写作时需注意：1. 使用第一人称，描述旅行经历时用一般过去时；2. 要涵盖旅行中的具体活动、对本次旅行的评价、让旅行更有意义的建议这三个要点；3. 文章结构清晰，开篇点明旅行意义，中间详细叙述旅行过程，结尾给出合理建议，语言需通顺连贯，符合词数要求。
