假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Tony即将来中国,他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的要点提示进行适当发挥,用英语给Tony写一封邮件,对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。

【要点】
【注意】1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have
asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese
traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time,
we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks
instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in
your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday
cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we
should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring
Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a
traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring
Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during
the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will
like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇面向笔友的介绍中国习俗的英文邮件写作题,解题思路如下:1.先明确核心要求:要完整覆盖表格给出的4类场景的习俗要点,语气友好符合笔友交流的语境,词数控制在90左右,题干给出的开头结尾不计入总词数无需额外撰写。2.梳理行文逻辑:先用过渡句承接对方想要了解中国习俗的需求,之后用first、second这类逻辑连接词依次串联初次见面礼仪、用餐习惯、生日习俗、春节习俗四个部分的内容,把表格提示信息准确转化为英文,春节部分补充大家熟知的年夜饭、收红包的传统让内容更完整。3.最后收尾自然表达对Tony到来的期待和欢迎,检查有没有遗漏要点、语法错误,避免出现真实人名校名地名即可。
【解析】
步骤1:开篇引入,回应对方的诉求,说明接下来要介绍相关的中国生活方式和传统习俗,承接给定的开头语境。
步骤2:分模块逐一介绍对应习俗:
① 初次见面场景:说明中国人第一次见面通常会握手或者点头致意;
② 用餐场景:说明中国人用餐使用筷子而非刀叉,同时说明嘴里有食物时不要说话的餐桌礼仪;
③ 生日场景:说明生日时大家通常会吃蛋糕和长寿面,收到礼物时要双手接过表示礼貌;
④ 春节场景:补充春节作为中国最重要的节日,大家会在除夕吃家庭团圆饭,孩子们会收到寓意好运的红包,完善该部分内容。
步骤3:收尾表达期待见面、欢迎对方来中国的意愿,贴合给定的结尾语境,整体行文连贯,语法准确,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作
情景英语作文
习俗英文表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的提纲类应用文写作,所有核心要点都已明确给出,学生只需要将提示的中文信息准确转化为通顺的英文,用合适的过渡词串联内容,适当补充符合常识的春节相关习俗完善内容,保持语气友好贴合笔友交流的场景,就可以完成符合要求的作文,整体难度较低,主要考察学生基础的英文表达和信息整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.8