2025·江苏扬州江都区一次月考春天是游览扬州的最佳季节,Tom和他的同学在计划去扬州的三日游。假如你是Tom,请根据表格中的要点,写一篇有关这次旅行的计划和注意事项的短文。
【注意】1.文中必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数100左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and take cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
答案：One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers,
fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it
perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to
learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the
natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day,
we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan
Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and
take cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow
public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：这是一篇旅行计划类短文，需要覆盖表格全部要点，词数100左右，还要补充合理的出行注意事项。首先第一步先搭建文章结构：第一部分先承接给定开头，介绍扬州的变化，先自拟一个变化点比如近年城市文旅建设发展迅速，再自然带出花朵美丽、空气清新、街道干净、交通便利的优势，说明扬州非常适合春日出游。第二部分用过渡句引出三日行程，按照第一天、第二天、第三天的时间顺序依次对应表格里的三个活动安排，不要遗漏要点。第三部分补充符合出游场景的合理注意事项，最后抒发对这次旅行的期待，完成感受部分的内容。全程注意不要生硬直译表格文字，适当用衔接词让行文流畅，时态以一般将来时为主即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先介绍扬州的整体变化：点明扬州近些年发展变化很大，依次引出鲜花盛放、空气清新、街道整洁、交通便利的特点，说明这里非常适合春日出行。
2. 用过渡句引出本次三日游的具体安排：第一天安排参观博物馆，了解扬州当地的特色文化；第二天前往瘦西湖，欣赏自然风光；第三天到东关街品尝特色美食，选购心仪的纪念品。
3. 补充合理的出行注意事项，比如提前查看天气、穿舒适的鞋子、随身携带相机记录景色，同时要注意爱护环境、遵守公共秩序，最后表达对本次扬州之旅的期待，完成感受部分的内容。
4. 通读全文检查：确认所有表格要点都已覆盖，专有名词拼写正确，时态统一合理，词数符合100左右的要求，语句通顺没有语法错误。
【答案】
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and take cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
旅行计划写作，一般将来时，专有名词拼写
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作，给出的要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照时间逻辑梳理行程内容，适当补充符合出游场景的细节和注意事项，避免逐字生硬翻译表格内容，做好语句衔接，就可以完成一篇合格的短文，同时也考察了学生对出行类话题的常用词汇积累。
【难度系数】
0.7
