来自英国的John一直期待能够到北京旅行,以更好地了解这座城市。请你写一篇短文介绍他通过在线旅游网站了解到的信息。
【注意】1.内容应涵盖所有要点,并可适当发挥。
2.词数90左右,开头已给出不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实人名、网站名等信息。
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
答案：One possible version:
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing.
He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It
is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities
in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are
always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's
a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of
interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the
Palace Museum. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most
famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes
to Beijing in person.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：这是一篇介绍北京旅行相关信息的说明文，需要覆盖表格给出的三个核心要点，词数控制在90左右，开头已经给出无需重写。解题思路可以按三步推进：第一步先完成城市概况部分的写作，从历史悠久、北京作为首都的属性、当地居民友善的人文角度切入，符合要点要求；第二步说明最佳旅行时间，选择气候舒适的春季，解释此时气温不冷不热适合出行的原因，完成第二个要点；第三步列举北京的知名景点，比如长城、故宫、颐和园，还可以适当补充北京特色美食丰富内容，最后收尾表达对旅行的期待，全程注意不要出现真实人名、网站名，调整语句衔接让行文流畅，控制总词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 承接给定开头，首先介绍北京城市概况：点明北京是中国的首都，拥有悠久的历史，是国内超大型城市之一，当地居民待人友善热情，完成历史、人文维度的概况介绍。
2. 接着介绍最佳旅行时间：明确推荐春季前往北京，说明春季的北京气温适中，既不会过于炎热也不会过于寒冷，体感舒适非常适合外出游览，清晰说明推荐的原因。
3. 随后列举北京的知名游览景点，写出长城、故宫、颐和园等标志性景点，还可以补充提及北京特色美食北京烤鸭丰富内容，让内容更饱满。
4. 最后收尾表达John对亲自到访北京、拥有愉快假期的期待，通读全文检查所有要点是否全部覆盖，删除无关内容，调整语句让衔接自然，确认词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing.
He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
【知识点】
旅行话题写作，要点类英语作文，说明文写作
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提示类话题写作，要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照给定的三个写作要点依次展开叙述，适当补充合理的细节让行文连贯，控制词数在要求区间内，避免出现规定不能出现的真实信息，就可以完成一篇合格的短文，整体对学生的词汇和句式要求不高。
【难度系数】
0.7
