八、书面表达(本题满分20分)
76. 红星中学的王校长在学校网站的英语栏目"HEAR YOUR VOICE"发帖,想要了解学生的学习情况以及学校哪些方面需要改进。假如你是学生李华,请根据校长的帖子,选择其中至少两个方面反映问题,并提出建议,词数90左右(回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数)。

Dear Mr Wang,
I am Li Hua from Grade Eight. I really enjoy my school life here.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案:八、76. One possible version:
Dear Mr Wang,
I am Li Hua from Grade Eight. I really enjoy my school life here.
However, there are still some problems. First, some teaching facilities are old. For example, the desks and chairs in some classrooms are broken, which makes us feel uncomfortable when we study. I suggest the school repair or replace them as soon as possible to create a better learning environment. Second, some teachers often take up our 15-minute break. We need this time to relax and get ready for the next class, so I hope they can respect our break time and not give extra lessons during this period.
I believe these suggestions will help make our school a better place for all of us.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以学生李华的身份给王校长回帖,需从校长提出的问题中选至少两个方面,先反映存在的问题,再提出合理建议,词数控制在90左右。解题思路:1. 审题确定写作方向,选取如“教学设施陈旧”“老师占用休息时间”这两个典型问题;2. 针对每个问题,先说明具体情况,再阐述该问题带来的影响,最后给出对应的建议;3. 注意书信格式,结合已给的开头结尾,补充中间内容,保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】写作时,首先明确要选取的两个问题,比如教学设施方面:部分教室的桌椅损坏,影响学习舒适度,建议学校及时维修或更换;休息时间方面:老师常占用15分钟的休息时间,学生需要时间放松准备下节课,建议老师尊重休息时间。然后将这些内容组织成连贯的英语句子,注意用词准确,符合书信语气,控制词数在要求范围内,确保结构清晰,问题和建议对应合理。
【答案】
Dear Mr Wang,
I am Li Hua from Grade Eight. I really enjoy my school life here.
However, there are still some problems. First, some teaching facilities are old. For example, the desks and chairs in some classrooms are broken, which makes us feel uncomfortable when we study. I suggest the school repair or replace them as soon as possible to create a better learning environment. Second, some teachers often take up our 15-minute break. We need this time to relax and get ready for the next class, so I hope they can respect our break time and not give extra lessons during this period.
I believe these suggestions will help make our school a better place for all of us.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、书信写作、问题与建议类作文
【点评】本题考查学生的英语综合运用能力,要求学生能结合实际情况准确表达问题并提出合理建议,同时规范使用书信格式,是常见的英语写作题型,能有效考查学生的语言组织和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5