八、书面表达(本题满分20分)
76. [2025 南通市启东市期中]在人生的长河中，我们总能邂逅几位挚友。他们如同夜空中闪亮的星星，照亮我们的世界。请你根据下面思维导图的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你的好朋友。
要求：
1. 包含思维导图提供的所有要点；可酌情增加内容，以使文章连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右；
3. 不要出现真实校名和人名。
答案：76. One possible version:
I am lucky to have a good friend named Alex. He is tall with bright eyes and always wears a friendly smile. He is very clever and helpful.
Alex has many hobbies. He enjoys DIY projects. Last month, he even helped me put in a new light in my room. He also loves travelling. We visited the World Park together last summer and learned a lot about different countries.
In his ideal school, there would be more practical lessons and science labs. I really enjoy staying with Alex because he always makes life more interesting and colourful.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇介绍好朋友的英语书面表达，需依据思维导图的四个核心分支（外貌、性格、爱好、理想学校）组织内容。写作时要先明确朋友的基本信息，依次对应各分支要点：外貌（looks）、性格（characteristics）、爱好（hobbies下的DIY及装灯事例、旅行及世界公园经历）、理想学校（ideal school），同时补充细节让文章连贯，控制词数在90左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇介绍朋友的名字、外貌特征（如高个子、明亮的眼睛）和性格特点（如聪明、乐于助人），对应思维导图的looks和characteristics；2. 中间部分写爱好：先讲DIY，举例“帮我装新灯”，再讲旅行，举例“一起去世界公园”，覆盖hobbies下的所有要点；3. 最后写理想学校的设想，再表达和朋友相处的感受，使文章完整连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am lucky to have a good friend named Alex. He is tall with bright eyes and always wears a friendly smile. He is very clever and helpful.
Alex has many hobbies. He enjoys DIY projects. Last month, he even helped me put in a new light in my room. He also loves travelling. We visited the World Park together last summer and learned a lot about different countries.
In his ideal school, there would be more practical lessons and science labs. I really enjoy staying with Alex because he always makes life more interesting and colourful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文严格覆盖思维导图所有要点，结构清晰，内容充实，通过具体事例（装灯、游世界公园）让文章生动自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
