最近阳光中学正在举行“寻找好少年”活动。请根据表格内的信息写一篇英语短文，向活动组委会推荐你的好朋友 Millie。
要求:1. 要点齐全，表达完整，书写工整，卷面整洁；2. 省略号处需适当发挥，词数不少于 60。
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——用第一人称写推荐信。
2. 审内容——个人基本信息(4 点)、爱好特长(3点)、梦想(至少 1 点)、省略号(自我发挥 1—2句)。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅——词数不少于 60,注意突出重点,不要遗漏要点。
范文欣赏
My friend Millie is a 13-year-old girl. She lives in Sucheng District. She is in Class 3, Grade 7. She has short hair and she doesn't wear glasses. She likes all the subjects. She is good at English. She has a keen interest in sport
答案：Dear the activity organizing committee,
I'd like to recommend my good friend Millie for the "Good Teenager" award of our school.
Millie is 13 years old. She lives in Sucheng District, and she studies in Class 3, Grade 7 now. She has short hair and doesn't wear glasses, she looks very energetic.
She likes all the subjects at school, and she is good at English, she can even talk with foreign people in English well. She is interested in sports very much, she often plays volleyball with her friends after school. She loves reading too, because she thinks books can bring her lots of new and fun knowledge.
Millie has a nice dream. She hopes she can be a writer when she grows up, and she can write many warm stories for children.
Millie is such a good student that all her teachers and classmates like her. I hope you can accept my recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先明确文体是推荐信，要使用书信的标准格式，开篇直接点明推荐Millie参评学校“好少年”的核心目的。第二步按照题目给出的信息模块顺序梳理写作逻辑：先写个人信息部分，把表格里的年龄、居住地、所在班级、短发不戴眼镜的外貌四个要点全部覆盖，还可以补充一句小细节让人物更生动。第三步处理爱好板块的三个要点：先写她喜爱所有学科，补充自己擅长的具体科目比如英语，再写她对运动感兴趣，补充日常运动的小习惯，最后写她热爱阅读，把省略号部分的原因合理补充为读书能获取新鲜有趣的知识，所有要点都落地。第四步写梦想部分，设定符合学生身份的梦想，比如长大后当作家给孩子写暖心故事，满足至少一点的要求。最后收尾总结Millie的优秀特质，再次表达希望组委会采纳推荐的诉求，全程统一使用一般现在时，保证语句通顺，词数达标，没有遗漏任何要求的要点。
【解析】
1. 搭建书信框架：开头使用正式称呼点明收信方是活动组委会，开篇直接说明写作意图是推荐好友Millie参评“好少年”奖项，结尾附上落款，符合推荐信的格式要求。
2. 撰写个人信息段落：完整对应表格给出的4项信息，依次介绍Millie13岁、家住在宿城区、就读于七年级3班、留短发不戴眼镜，补充“她看起来充满活力”的细节，让人物形象更鲜活。
3. 撰写爱好特长段落：依次展开3项爱好相关要点：说明她喜爱所有在校科目，擅长英语甚至可以流利和外国人用英语交流；她对运动很感兴趣，课后经常和朋友打排球；她热爱阅读，原因是书籍可以带给她很多新奇有趣的知识，所有省略号部分的补充内容都贴合七年级学生的日常设定，逻辑自然。
4. 撰写梦想段落：明确写出Millie的梦想是长大后成为作家，为孩子们创作很多温暖的故事，满足梦想部分至少写一点的要求。
5. 收尾总结：点明Millie十分优秀，所有师生都很喜欢她，再次表达希望组委会接受推荐的诉求，全文时态统一为一般现在时，行文连贯，词数远高于60词的要求，所有要点无遗漏。
【答案】
Dear the activity organizing committee,
I'd like to recommend my good friend Millie for the "Good Teenager" award of our school.
Millie is 13 years old. She lives in Sucheng District, and she studies in Class 3, Grade 7 now. She has short hair and doesn't wear glasses, she looks very energetic.
She likes all the subjects at school, and she is good at English, she can even talk with foreign people in English well. She is interested in sports very much, she often plays volleyball with her friends after school. She loves reading too, because she thinks books can bring her lots of new and fun knowledge.
Millie has a nice dream. She hopes she can be a writer when she grows up, and she can write many warm stories for children.
Millie is such a good student that all her teachers and classmates like her. I hope you can accept my recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，一般现在时运用，要点作文谋篇
【点评】
本篇习作完全符合题目全部要求，书信格式规范得体，表格给出的所有要点全部覆盖无遗漏，省略号部分的拓展内容贴合Millie的学生身份，逻辑自然不生硬，时态使用准确，行文流畅连贯，首尾呼应推荐主题，充分展现了Millie的优秀特质，完全适配“好少年”评选的推荐语境，是一篇质量很高的七年级英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
巩固练习
请根据下表中的信息介绍你最好的朋友Mary，词数80左右。
要求:文章须包含所有信息并作适当拓展，其中爱好至少补充一个，梦想至少写一个。
My best friend
Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and slim. She wears glasses. She is in Class 1, Grade 7. Her classroom is on the ground floor. It is clean and bright.
Mary gets up at half past six every morning. Her home is not far from the school so she usually goes to school on foot.
Mary has a lot of hobbies. She likes playing the piano and she can play it very well. She also likes reading books. She enjoys swimming as well.
Mary dreams to be a teacher when she grows up. I hope her dream will come true.
答案：My best friend
Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and slim. She wears glasses. She is in Class 1, Grade 7. Her classroom is on the ground floor. It is clean and bright.
Mary gets up at half past six every morning. Her home is not far from the school so she usually goes to school on foot.
Mary has a lot of hobbies. She likes playing the piano and she can play it very well. She also likes reading books. She enjoys swimming as well.
Mary dreams to be a teacher when she grows up. I hope her dream will come true.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题是介绍你的好友Mary，必须完整包含表格给出的所有信息，爱好至少额外补充1个，至少写出1个梦想，词数控制在80左右。接下来我们可以按照人物介绍的常规逻辑安排行文顺序：第一步先写最基础的个人信息，把姓名、年龄、外貌特征这部分表格信息先梳理出来；第二步写校园相关内容，依次交代她的班级、教室位置环境，再写作息和上学的出行方式，覆盖School板块的全部内容；第三步写爱好，先把给定的弹钢琴、阅读写上，再补充一个合理的爱好比如游泳；最后补充一个符合逻辑的梦想，再加一句简单祝福收尾，全程用描述常态的一般现在时，把所有要点自然衔接就能完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题，直接引出介绍对象，依次交代基础个人信息，覆盖姓名、年龄、外貌的全部给定内容：Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and slim. She wears glasses.
2. 接着介绍校园相关内容，先说明所在班级、教室的位置和环境，再介绍作息和上学的交通方式，完整覆盖School板块的所有信息：She is in Class 1, Grade 7. Her classroom is on the ground floor. It is clean and bright. Mary gets up at half past six every morning. Her home is not far from the school so she usually goes to school on foot.
3. 然后写爱好部分，先呈现给定的弹钢琴、阅读两个爱好，额外补充游泳作为新爱好，满足题干补充至少一个爱好的要求：Mary has a lot of hobbies. She likes playing the piano and she can play it very well. She also likes reading books. She enjoys swimming as well.
4. 最后补充合理的职业梦想，再加一句祝福收尾，满足题干写至少一个梦想的要求：Mary dreams to be a teacher when she grows up. I hope her dream will come true.
【答案】
My best friend
Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and slim. She wears glasses. She is in Class 1, Grade 7. Her classroom is on the ground floor. It is clean and bright.
Mary gets up at half past six every morning. Her home is not far from the school so she usually goes to school on foot.
Mary has a lot of hobbies. She likes playing the piano and she can play it very well. She also likes reading books. She enjoys swimming as well.
Mary dreams to be a teacher when she grows up. I hope her dream will come true.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作，一般现在时，信息整合
【点评】
本文行文逻辑清晰，按照个人基础信息、校园生活、兴趣爱好、未来梦想的顺序顺次展开，完整覆盖了表格给出的全部信息，补充的爱好和梦想完全符合题干要求，语句通顺自然，没有语法错误，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的七年级人物介绍类范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
