典型例题
假如你是阳光中学的李华,来自广州全运会的运动员代表们要来你们学校访问交流。请根据下列表格中的内容提示,用英文向他们介绍你自己和你的学校生活。
要求:1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺;3. 词数80 左右。
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——英文自我介绍类应用文。
2. 审内容——介绍自身情况和学校生活,覆盖表格所有要点(爱好、学校、师生、希望)。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅——词数控制在 80 个左右,不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
范文欣赏
Hello, boys and girls. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I am Li Hua. I like reading books and singing songs. As for me, I like Chinese and English. But my favourite subject is Maths. After class, I like playing badminton with my classmates. Our school is big and clean. We have nice teachers. They are kind to
答案：Hello, dear athletes! Welcome to our school.
I'm Li Hua. I have many hobbies, like reading books and singing songs, and I also love doing sports after class. Our school is big and clean, there are many green trees and a large playground here. All our teachers are very kind, they always help us patiently when we have study problems. My classmates are all friendly too.
We hope you can have a wonderful time here and share your fun sports stories with us later.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到题目先完成审题步骤：第一明确体裁是面向来访运动员的介绍类应用文，核心目的是向访客介绍自己和校园生活；第二梳理需要覆盖的全部要点：个人爱好、学校特征、友善的师生（需要补充对应例子）、美好祝愿四个部分；第三确定全文以一般现在时为核心时态，符合介绍日常情况的语境；第四明确要求不能出现真实校名，词数控制在80左右。写作时按照「问候欢迎→自我介绍+爱好介绍→学校特征介绍→师生情况举例说明→结尾表达祝愿」的逻辑顺次展开，就能自然串联所有要点，保证内容连贯通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：首先向来访的运动员礼貌问好，表达欢迎，快速贴合本次访问交流的场景；
2. 个人爱好部分：介绍自己是李华，点明自己的爱好包含读书、唱歌，还可以补充课后运动的小细节，让内容更饱满；
3. 学校介绍部分：紧扣提示的big and clean的特征，补充合理的校园细节比如校内有很多绿树、大型操场，让校园的形象更具体；
4. 师生介绍部分：紧扣提示的kind要求，补充举例：当我们遇到学习难题时老师总会耐心提供帮助，同时说明同班同学也都十分友好，满足题目要求的举例说明规则；
5. 结尾收尾：表达美好期许，祝愿访客在学校度过愉快的时光，还可以邀请对方分享运动相关的趣事，贴合运动员来访的交流主题。
最后通读全文检查：确认所有表格要点全部覆盖，没有出现真实校名，时态统一为一般现在时，词数符合要求，语句连贯自然。
【答案】
Hello, dear athletes! Welcome to our school.
I'm Li Hua. I have many hobbies, like reading books and singing songs, and I also love doing sports after class. Our school is big and clean, there are many green trees and a large playground here. All our teachers are very kind, they always help us patiently when we have study problems. My classmates are all friendly too.
We hope you can have a wonderful time here and share your fun sports stories with us later.
【知识点】
情景英语写作，一般现在时运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本篇短文完全贴合本次接待运动员来访的交流场景，逻辑层层递进，从问候引入到依次介绍个人爱好、校园环境、师生风貌，最后给出美好祝愿，所有表格提示的要点全部覆盖，补充的举例细节生动真实，语气礼貌得体，词数符合题目要求，没有出现违规的真实校名信息，整体表达流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.7
(2026·徐州东苑中学期中)进入中学后,你一定有很多感受。请根据以下内容,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,介绍你的学校和校园生活。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1. What is your school like? 2. Which place do you like best? Why? 3. What activities do you take part in? 4. What are your teachers and classmates like? 5. What do you think of your school?
My School Life
A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams.
My school is very big and beautiful.
My favourite place is the library. Because I can read all kinds of interesting books there.
I take part in many activities.
I'm in the school basketball team.
I also join the Science Club where we do exciting experiments.
My teachers are very kind and knowledgeable.
They always help me when I have problems.
My classmates are friendly. We often play and study together.
I think my school is amazing.
答案：写作能力突破
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:材料所给内容需完整表达,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍学校的概况;第二步,分别阐述最喜欢的校园地点及原因、参与的活动、老师和同学的特点;第三步,表达对学校的看法。
[词句积累]
①all kinds of 各种各样的 ②take part in 参加
③They always help me when I have problems. (when 引导的时间状语从句)
One possible version:
My School Life
A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams. My school is very big and beautiful. My favourite place is the library. Because I can read all kinds of interesting books there. I take part in many activities. I'm in the school basketball team. I also join the Science Club where we do exciting experiments. My teachers are very kind and knowledgeable. They always help me when I have problems. My classmates are friendly. We often play and study together. I think my school is amazing.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先审题：第一明确体裁是介绍校园生活的记叙文，全篇使用一般现在时即可；第二要把题干给出的5个要点全部覆盖，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作逻辑：首先承接已给出的开头，先整体介绍学校的外观特点，接着说明自己最喜欢的校园场所和对应的理由，之后介绍自己参与的校园活动，再描述老师和同学的性格特点，最后收尾表达自己对学校的整体评价，全程控制总词数在70左右，适当用简单的连接词让语句连贯自然，避免出现基础语法错误。
【解析】
解题步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先对学校整体情况做简单描述，点明学校的外观特征，完成第一个要点的作答。
2. 选取校园里有代表性的场所（比如图书馆）作为自己最喜欢的地点，说明该地点给自己带来的好处，完成第二个要点的作答。
3. 结合中学生常见的校园场景，列举自己参与的文体、社团类活动，完成第三个要点的作答。
4. 分别描述老师和蔼博学、同学友善互助的特点，完成第四个要点的作答。
5. 最后表达自己对学校的正面评价，完成第五个要点的作答，通读全文调整语句，保证行文流畅、词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My School Life
A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams. My school is very big and beautiful. My favourite place is the library. Because I can read all kinds of interesting books there. I take part in many activities. I'm in the school basketball team. I also join the Science Club where we do exciting experiments. My teachers are very kind and knowledgeable. They always help me when I have problems. My classmates are friendly. We often play and study together. I think my school is amazing.
【知识点】
校园话题写作，一般现在时运用，要点作文谋篇
【点评】
本题是初中英语入门阶段非常典型的校园生活类写作题，题干给出的提示要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照逻辑顺序逐一覆盖所有要点，适当补充合理细节就能完成写作，写作时要注意避免逐字翻译导致语句生硬，同时注意控制词数符合70词左右的要求，不要出现时态、主谓一致类的基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
