XI. (2026·苏州工业园区星湾学校期中)书面表达(11 分)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Vicky 给你写封信想了解你在新学校的情况,请你根据以下思维导图,选择至少2个方面,用英语写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing? You are a middle school student now, right? What do you think of your new school life? Would you please tell me about your favourites in your new school life? I hope to get your letter soon.
Yours,
Vicky
注意:1. 词数不少于70,邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2. 邮件必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I'd like to tell you about my school life.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
答案：XI.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一封书信。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己在学校的情况,可适当发挥,注意要点齐全,表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,向对方介绍自己的学校生活;第二步,从最喜欢的地方、朋友、科目及俱乐部等方面介绍自己的学校生活。
[词句积累]
①a lot of许多 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③learn about了解 ④communicate with sb和某人交流
⑤And I think English can help me communicate with people from all over the world in the future.(省略了that的宾语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I'd like to tell you about my school life.
My favourite place at school is the library. It is very quiet and has a lot of books. I can read different kinds of books there and gain a lot of knowledge. My best friend at school is Tom. He is a very kind and helpful boy. We often study together and play basketball after school. My favourite teacher is Mr Wang. His classes are very interesting. He always makes difficult knowledge easy to understand. My favourite subject is English. I like learning about different cultures through English. And I think English can help me communicate with people from all over the world in the future. I also like the club activities in our school. I joined the Reading Club. In the club, we can exchange reading experiences and share our favourite books.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】首先审题，明确体裁为书信，时态用一般现在时，需结合思维导图的至少2个方面介绍新学校生活，同时满足词数、要点齐全等要求。解题思路：第一步，承接已给出的开头引出介绍学校生活；第二步，选取思维导图中的内容（如最喜欢的地方、科目、朋友等），补充细节使内容连贯；第三步，按要求完成结尾，确保符合书信规范。
【解析】写作时，先遵循书信结构，开头衔接题干内容；中间选取思维导图要点，添加合理细节（如图书馆的特点、好友的性格等），运用一般现在时，使用积累的词汇短语保证语言准确，确保内容连贯、词数达标；最后按要求完成结尾，满足题干所有规定。
【答案】
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I'd like to tell you about my school life.
My favourite place at school is the library. It is very quiet and has a lot of books. I can read different kinds of books there and gain a lot of knowledge. My best friend at school is Tom. He is a very kind and helpful boy. We often study together and play basketball after school. My favourite teacher is Mr Wang. His classes are very interesting. He always makes difficult knowledge easy to understand. My favourite subject is English. I like learning about different cultures through English. And I think English can help me communicate with people from all over the world in the future. I also like the club activities in our school. I joined the Reading Club. In the club, we can exchange reading experiences and share our favourite books.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、词汇短语运用
【点评】该范文要点齐全，涵盖思维导图多个方面，内容连贯通顺，补充细节使文章生动，语言准确，符合初中英语书面表达要求，满足题干各项规定。
【难度系数】0.5
