自然灾害时有发生,而且发生得很突然,很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题,根据以下提示写一篇报告,给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。

【注意】1. 不少于90词。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to Do in an Earthquake
答案:What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes often happen very suddenly and it is hard to warn people ahead of time. So it is necessary for us to learn some safety tips for earthquakes.
When you are inside a building during an earthquake, never jump out of high buildings, or you will get badly hurt. You can hide under a strong table to keep away from falling furniture and things. When the ground stops shaking, you should leave the building quickly and never take the lift.
If you are outside, remember to keep away from bridges, tall buildings and power lines. If you are in a car, ask the driver to stop the car at a safe place and stay inside until the earthquake is over. If you are in the mountains, watch out for falling rocks all the time.
What's more, you must keep calm all the time. A clear mind can help you stay away from most danger.
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇提示类实用英语写作题,解题思路如下:
1. 首先确定文章主题是地震逃生建议,开篇先点明地震突发、难以提前预警的背景,自然引出学习地震避险技巧的必要性,完成开篇点题。
2. 接下来按照提示的分类,先写室内场景的避险规则:依次覆盖表格里“不要从高楼跳下、躲在桌子下方、地面停止晃动后的撤离要求”三个要点,还可以补充“不要乘坐电梯”这类符合常识的合理细节,让内容更通顺。
3. 之后写室外场景的避险规则:依次覆盖“远离桥梁、在车内的避险做法、在山区的注意事项”三个要点,补充远离高空坠物风险区域等细节,让逻辑更顺畅。
4. 最后补充提示里要求的“全程保持冷静”的内容,点明冷静的作用收尾,同时保证总词数超过90词,不出现真实人名地名,满足所有写作要求。
【解析】
写作按照总分总结构展开:
1. 开头段:直接引入背景,说明地震突发性强、难以预警,点明掌握地震安全技巧十分必要,引出下文的建议。
2. 中间主体第一段(室内场景):明确说明身处建筑内部时的三条规则:严禁从高楼跳下避免重伤,躲在坚固桌下避开坠落的物品,地面停止晃动后快速撤离建筑、禁止使用电梯,完整覆盖所有室内提示要点。
3. 中间主体第二段(室外场景):依次说明不同室外场景的避险要求:远离桥梁、高楼和电线等危险区域;身处车内时让司机将车停在安全区域,留在车内直到地震结束;身处山区时时刻留意滚落的岩石,完整覆盖所有室外提示要点。
4. 结尾段:补充说明全程保持冷静的重要性,清晰的头脑能帮助我们规避绝大多数危险,完成全文收尾。
【答案】
What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes often happen very suddenly and it is hard to warn people ahead of time. So it is necessary for us to learn some safety tips for earthquakes.
When you are inside a building during an earthquake, never jump out of high buildings, or you will get badly hurt. You can hide under a strong table to keep away from falling furniture and things. When the ground stops shaking, you should leave the building quickly and never take the lift.
If you are outside, remember to keep away from bridges, tall buildings and power lines. If you are in a car, ask the driver to stop the car at a safe place and stay inside until the earthquake is over. If you are in the mountains, watch out for falling rocks all the time.
What's more, you must keep calm all the time. A clear mind can help you stay away from most danger.
【知识点】
英语情景作文写作
地震避险常识
说明文结构搭建
【点评】
本题属于实用类情景写作,所有核心要点都已通过表格给出,降低了审题难度,既考查学生的英语语句组织、连贯表达的能力,也能让学生在完成写作的过程中掌握实用的地震逃生知识。写作时只需要按照室内、室外的逻辑分类梳理所有提示要点,适当补充符合常识的细节让行文流畅,很容易满足词数和内容要求拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7