B. 写作。(计20分)
读万卷书,行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日,你们学校为此举行了以“Reading Makes a Better Me”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,内容应包含以下要点。
【要点】1. What's your reading habit?
2. What's your favourite book? Why?
3. What do you think of reading?
【要求】1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Reading Makes a Better Me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
答案:B. One possible version
Reading Makes a Better Me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I read various books. I read for half an hour every day and I often go to the library.
My favourite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It tells us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games, and I focus more on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点,不能遗漏:第一点要介绍自己的日常阅读习惯,可以从每日阅读时长、常去的阅读场所、常读的读物类型这些角度切入,内容要符合中学生的真实状态;第二点要明确写出自己最喜欢的书籍,同时讲清喜欢的原因,比如书籍的主题、传递的正向价值观、给自己的启发;第三点要结合自身的变化谈对阅读的看法,紧扣“阅读让我变得更好”的核心主题,最后注意控制总词数在100左右,不要出现真实人名校名地名,行文衔接自然,和题干给出的首尾内容顺畅衔接即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成:
1. 承接题干给出的开篇句,完成第一个要点的表述:说明自己日常会阅读各类读物,每天坚持阅读半小时,也经常去图书馆借阅书籍,清晰交代自己的阅读习惯。
2. 完成第二个要点的表述:点明自己最喜欢的书是《秘密花园》,说明书的核心主题是亲近自然、互助友爱,它传递了面对困难要心怀希望、永不放弃的道理,清晰说明喜爱这本书的理由。
3. 完成第三个要点的表述:结合自身变化谈阅读的意义,说明坚持每日阅读后自己不再沉迷手游,学习专注力提升,也更擅长独立思考、自主解决问题,充分体现阅读让自己变得更优秀的核心主旨,最后自然衔接题干给出的结尾句,检查全文语句通顺、无违规信息、字数符合要求即可。
【答案】
Reading Makes a Better Me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I read various books. I read for half an hour every day and I often go to the library.
My favourite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It tells us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games, and I focus more on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
【知识点】
英语征文写作,要点整合表达,语篇连贯构建
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个要点,逻辑层次清晰,从介绍个人阅读习惯,到分享喜爱的书籍及理由,再到阐述阅读给自己带来的正向改变,层层递进,完全贴合“Reading Makes a Better Me”的主题,内容贴合中学生真实生活,用词准确地道,字数符合要求,没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息,是一篇符合评分标准的优秀习作,也为同类主题的英语写作提供了清晰的参考思路。
【难度系数】
0.7