B. 写作。(计20分)
假如你是某国际野生动物俱乐部的成员。最近,你对鲨鱼(shark)的生存现状进行了一次调查,发现鲨鱼有濒临灭绝的危险。请你根据以下提示信息,写一篇英语短文发布在你们俱乐部的网站上,呼吁人们保护鲨鱼。

【提示】
Habitat(栖息地) | the sea
--- | ---
Food | small animals
Situation | in danger
Reasons | marine pollution(海洋污染)
| p图ple kill sharks for their fins
Ways to protect them | make the sea clean
| stop killing sharks
| make laws to protect sharks
Appeal(呼吁) | ...
【要求】1. 短文要包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 句子通顺,语法正确,书写整洁。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
4. 90词左右。
Sharks in Danger
答案:B. One possible version
Sharks in Danger
Sharks live in the sea. They eat small animals. There were many sharks in the sea before. But now they are in danger. Do you know why?
First, marine pollution is very serious, so it's very hard for sharks to live in the sea. Second, people kill sharks for their fins. Every year people kill lots of sharks in the world. The situation is getting worse. We must do something to protect them.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. We should make the sea clean and stop killing sharks. The government should make laws to protect sharks. It's also a good idea to raise public awareness of protecting sharks. Please take action now.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作定位:这是一篇呼吁保护鲨鱼的提示类英语短文,第一步先梳理文章整体框架:第一部分先介绍鲨鱼的基础生存属性,对应表格里栖息地、食物两个要点,紧接着点明鲨鱼如今濒危的处境;第二部分分析鲨鱼濒危的两个核心原因,把海洋污染、人类为获取鱼翅猎杀鲨鱼的信息自然串联;第三部分给出对应保护方案,覆盖净化海洋、停止猎杀、立法保护三个要点,最后补充合理的呼吁内容收尾。写作时要注意用衔接词理顺逻辑,控制总词数在90左右,不能遗漏任何给定要点,也不能出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
可以按照三步完成写作:
1. 开篇引入:直接介绍鲨鱼的基本生存情况,说明鲨鱼栖息在海洋中,以小型生物为食,引出现在鲨鱼已经处于危险境地的现状,用设问句引出下文的原因分析,吸引读者注意力。
2. 主体论述:用First、Second这类逻辑衔接词,分别说明鲨鱼濒危的两个原因:一是海洋污染加剧,鲨鱼的生存环境被严重破坏;二是人类为了鱼翅大量捕杀鲨鱼,点明生存现状正在持续恶化,我们必须采取行动。
3. 收尾呼吁:先点明保护动物就是保护人类自己的核心观点,依次列出三项保护举措,再补充提升公众保护意识的合理拓展内容,向所有人发出立刻行动的倡议,完成全文。
【答案】
Sharks in Danger
Sharks live in the sea. They eat small animals. There were many sharks in the sea before. But now they are in danger. Do you know why?
First, marine pollution is very serious, so it's very hard for sharks to live in the sea. Second, people kill sharks for their fins. Every year people kill lots of sharks in the world. The situation is getting worse. We must do something to protect them.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. We should make the sea clean and stop killing sharks. The government should make laws to protect sharks. It's also a good idea to raise public awareness of protecting sharks. Please take action now.
【知识点】
提示类英语写作,环保主题表达,一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于图表提示类的应用文写作,所有核心要点都已明确给出,难度适中,既考察学生对基础英语词句的整合运用能力,也向学生渗透了保护野生动物、维护生态平衡的环保理念。写作时注意不要遗漏表格给出的任何要点,适当使用逻辑衔接词可以让文章条理更清晰,更容易拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.6