[名师点评]
文章行文连贯,条理清晰,先表达对Jack 的建议的感谢,接着说明自己对篮球的喜爱以及打篮球的情况,强调运动的好处,最后表达对Jack 回复邮件的期望。
① 用词准确,favourite 和 especially 自然流畅地引出文章核心内容。
② 语言风格平实、直接,把不能每天练习篮球的原因交代得清楚明了。
③ 使用短语 be good for 和“make sb. + adj.”,表达了自己对篮球的喜爱及对运动的积极态度。
素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. I like painting.
（介绍爱好,下同）
2. He is a fan of science.
3. Listening to music is my hobby.
4. He thinks science is very cool. （个人看法）
[中间句]
1. In his free time, Daniel reads many science books.
（个人行为,下同）
2. At home, he likes to take things apart and learn how they work.
3. We enjoy sharing our paintings and talking about art.
4. It's my favourite sport because it's interesting.
（爱好原因,下同）
5. It makes me feel happy.
[结尾句]
1. He wants to be a scientist one day.
（未来展望,下同）
2. I hope my dream can come true.
3. I think I am able to do them better.
4. I would like to design beautiful clothes in the future.
[名言警句]
1. Where there is no hobby, there is no interest.
没有爱好,就没有兴趣。
2. Each man has his own hobby.
人各有所好。
3. Hobbies are the best way to relax.
爱好是最好的放松方式。
4. Interest is the best teacher.
兴趣是最好的老师。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是李雷,请你根据以下问题写一篇英语短文来介绍你的爱好。
问题:
1. What is your favourite hobby?
2. Why do you have this hobby?
3. What do you think of your hobby?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般过去时和一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 描述你的爱好是什么、你是如何培养爱好的以及你的爱好给你带来了什么好处。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Playing football is my favourite hobby. It plays an important role in my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I thought it was very interesting.
When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play football in a team.
Now it is my favourite hobby.
Playing football not only helps me keep fit, but also brings me lots of fun.
Also, I make friends with others by playing football with them.
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