小试身手
英语课上,你和同学们就“谁是聪明的购物者”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的朋友Anna和Paul的自我评价。请你根据记录内容写一篇英语小短文,总结他们的表现并做出简单的评价。要求:1. 短文须包含下面图表中的所有信息,可适当发挥;2. 不少于5句话(不包括已给内容)。

Today we talk about who the smart shoppers are in our class. My friends Anna and Paul share their ideas with us.
Anna always makes a shopping list and only buys things on the list. She thinks it can help her save time and money. She also looks for sales, so she can buy things at good prices, such as out-of-season(过季的) jackets or cheap T-shirts.
Paul doesn't make a shopping list. But he always looks for sales instead. He is careful not to waste money. For example, he compares prices in different shops before he buys something.
I think Anna and Paul are both smart shoppers. Anna is good at planning, and Paul is good at saving money. They both have something we can learn from.
答案:Anna always makes a shopping list and only buys things on the list. She thinks it can help her save time and money. She also looks for sales, so she can buy things at good prices, such as out-of-season(过季的) jackets or cheap T-shirts. Paul doesn't make a shopping list. But he always looks for sales instead. He is careful not to waste money. For example, he compares prices in different shops before he buys something.
I think Anna and Paul are both smart shoppers. Anna is good at planning, and Paul is good at saving money. They both have something we can learn from.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需根据图表中Anna和Paul在“Make a list”“Look for sales”两项的表现(Anna两项均表现好,Paul仅“Look for sales”表现好),结合给定开头,写不少于5句的英语短文,需包含所有图表信息并做评价。解题思路:1. 提取图表关键信息:Anna会做购物清单且会寻找促销;Paul不会做购物清单但会寻找促销。2. 结合开头,先分别描述两人的购物习惯,再给出合理评价,确保语句连贯、符合英语表达习惯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
根据图表信息,Anna在“Make a list”和“Look for sales”两项都做得很好,Paul仅在“Look for sales”上表现好,不会做购物清单。结合给定开头,先介绍Anna的购物习惯:Anna always makes a shopping list and only buys things on the list. She thinks it can help her save time and money. She also looks for sales, so she can buy things at good prices, such as out-of-season jackets or cheap T-shirts. 接着介绍Paul的:Paul doesn't make a shopping list. But he always looks for sales instead. He is careful not to waste money. For example, he compares prices in different shops before he buys something. 最后给出评价:I think Anna and Paul are both smart shoppers. Anna is good at planning, and Paul is good at saving money. They both have something we can learn from. 这样组织的短文包含所有图表信息,语句连贯,符合要求。
【答案】
Anna always makes a shopping list and only buys things on the list. She thinks it can help her save time and money. She also looks for sales, so she can buy things at good prices, such as out-of-season(过季的) jackets or cheap T-shirts. Paul doesn't make a shopping list. But he always looks for sales instead. He is careful not to waste money. For example, he compares prices in different shops before he buys something.
I think Anna and Paul are both smart shoppers. Anna is good at planning, and Paul is good at saving money. They both have something we can learn from.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、图表信息提取
【点评】
本题为图表类英语写作题,考查学生的信息整合与书面表达能力,要求准确提取图表中人物的行为信息,转化为连贯的短文并完成评价,是初中英语常见的写作题型,需学生掌握基础的英语表达和信息梳理方法。
【难度系数】
0.3