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经典例题
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动,号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜。请用英文回复他的邮件。
1. What problems are the animals facing?
2. What action should we take?
3. What's your advice?
【参考词汇】next Monday, elephants, golden monkeys, hunt, protect, raise money, pictures
【要求】1. 必须包含所有要点,并可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
4. 不少于90词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.

If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:The speech will be held next Monday. Now many wild animals are in great danger. For example, people hunt elephants for their ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their living areas because of deforestation. The number of these endangered animals is getting smaller and smaller, and they can hardly find safe places to live.
We can take many useful actions to protect them. First, we can put up lots of pictures of endangered animals to show people how serious their situation is. Second, we can raise money for the animal protection organization to help build more safe reserves for these animals.
My advice is that we can add some true moving stories about endangered animals in our speech, to make more people realize the importance of protecting them. We can also call on all the students not to buy any products made from wild animals.
解析:
【分析】这是一封回复交换生Tom的邮件,需围绕“保护濒危动物演讲”的三个核心要求展开:一是说明濒危动物面临的问题(结合参考词汇中的大象、金丝猴、偷猎等);二是列举可采取的保护行动(参考筹钱、贴图片等词汇);三是给出演讲的相关建议。写作时要紧扣所有要点,使用参考词汇,语句通顺,字数不少于90词,且不得出现真实信息,开头和结尾已给出,只需补充中间内容即可。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 先点明演讲时间为next Monday;2. 举例说明濒危动物的困境:人们偷猎大象获取象牙,金丝猴因森林砍伐失去栖息地,数量不断减少;3. 说明可采取的保护行动:张贴濒危动物的图片让公众了解现状,为动物保护组织筹集资金建设安全保护区;4. 给出演讲建议:加入濒危动物的真实感人故事,呼吁学生不购买野生动物制品,增强保护意识。
【答案】The speech will be held next Monday. Now many wild animals are in great danger. For example, people hunt elephants for their ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their living areas because of deforestation. The number of these endangered animals is getting smaller and smaller, and they can hardly find safe places to live.
We can take many useful actions to protect them. First, we can put up lots of pictures of endangered animals to show people how serious their situation is. Second, we can raise money for the animal protection organization to help build more safe reserves for these animals.
My advice is that we can add some true moving stories about endangered animals in our speech, to make more people realize the importance of protecting them. We can also call on all the students not to buy any products made from wild animals.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、濒危动物保护话题表达
【点评】该回复完整覆盖所有要求要点,运用了参考词汇,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,符合邮件写作规范,有效传递了保护濒危动物的理念,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6
1.本文是一封电子邮件。2.时态以一般现在时为主。3.注意邮件中应详细回复Tom关于保护濒危动物的演讲中需讨论的内容,可适当增加细节。
写作模板
开篇点题 → I'm writing to tell you some information about...

详细介绍 → There are many endangered animals in the world...
We should take action to protect them...

收篇结尾 → If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
答案:Dear Tom,
How are you doing recently?
I'm writing to tell you some information about your speech on protecting endangered animals. These contents will make your speech more wonderful and educational.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as giant pandas, red-crowned cranes and South China tigers. Now their living space is getting much smaller than before, and they can not find enough food to feed their babies. Some bad people even kill them to make money. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast now. We should take action to protect them. First, we can build more special nature reserves for them to live safely. Second, the government should make strict laws to stop people from hunting endangered animals. Third, we can also call on more people to not buy products made from wild animals, and tell students around us the importance of protecting wildlife.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
XXX
解析:
【分析】首先明确这是一封给Tom的电子邮件,需围绕“保护濒危动物的演讲内容”展开写作。第一步,开篇要问候Tom,再用模板句点明写信目的;第二步,详细介绍部分,先列举濒危动物例子说明其生存困境,再分点提出具体保护措施;第三步,结尾用模板句收尾,同时注意书信格式正确,时态以一般现在时为主,适当补充细节让内容更丰富。
【解析】
1. 书信格式:开头写称呼“Dear Tom,”,先问候“How are you doing recently?”;
2. 开篇点题:用模板句“I'm writing to tell you some information about your speech on protecting endangered animals. These contents will make your speech more wonderful and educational.”明确写信目的;
3. 详细介绍:先举例说明濒危动物(如大熊猫、丹顶鹤、华南虎),阐述它们的生存现状(栖息地缩小、食物短缺、被猎杀),再分三点提出保护措施:建立自然保护区、制定严格法律禁止猎杀、呼吁不买野生动物制品并宣传保护重要性;
4. 收篇结尾:用模板句“If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.”,最后写落款“Yours, XXX”。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing recently?
I'm writing to tell you some information about your speech on protecting endangered animals. These contents will make your speech more wonderful and educational.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as giant pandas, red-crowned cranes and South China tigers. Now their living space is getting much smaller than before, and they can not find enough food to feed their babies. Some bad people even kill them to make money. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast now. We should take action to protect them. First, we can build more special nature reserves for them to live safely. Second, the government should make strict laws to stop people from hunting endangered animals. Third, we can also call on more people to not buy products made from wild animals, and tell students around us the importance of protecting wildlife.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
XXX
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、话题表达
【点评】
本题是围绕“保护濒危动物”话题的书信写作,结构清晰,符合给定模板要求,内容充实,补充了具体例子和措施,语言准确,适合练习书信写作与环保话题表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
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