经典例题
(2025·江苏无锡宜兴丁蜀学区调研)假如你是婷婷，你想给你的美国笔友Tom写一封邮件，介绍你的学校和学校生活。
【要点】
1.学校有什么设施？
2.有什么课外活动？
3.自己有什么感想？
【要求】1.90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、完整。
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Tingting
答案：Our school is very beautiful. It has a new big library with different kinds of books, and we can borrow books there on weekdays. We also have a large playground and two modern labs for our science lessons. We have many after-school activities every Friday afternoon. We can join different clubs like the Reading Club and the Basketball Club. I am in the Reading Club, and I also often play badminton with my classmates after school.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求给美国笔友Tom写邮件介绍学校和校园生活，需覆盖三个核心要点：学校设施、课外活动、个人感想。解题思路：首先围绕学校设施展开，列举图书馆、操场、实验室等具体设施；接着说明课外活动，结合自身参与的俱乐部活动补充细节；最后表达对学校和校园生活的正面感想，确保内容连贯、词数符合要求，语气贴合笔友交流的亲切语境。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头介绍学校设施：Our school is very beautiful. It has a new big library with different kinds of books, and we can borrow books there on weekdays. We also have a large playground and two modern labs for our science lessons. 再说明课外活动：We have many after-school activities every Friday afternoon. We can join different clubs like the Reading Club and the Basketball Club. I am in the Reading Club, and I also often play badminton with my classmates after school. 最后衔接结尾的感想，确保所有要点完整，语言流畅自然，符合90词左右的要求。
【答案】
Our school is very beautiful. It has a new big library with different kinds of books, and we can borrow books there on weekdays. We also have a large playground and two modern labs for our science lessons. We have many after-school activities every Friday afternoon. We can join different clubs like the Reading Club and the Basketball Club. I am in the Reading Club, and I also often play badminton with my classmates after school.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活实际，考查学生围绕指定要点组织语言、完成符合要求的邮件写作的能力，是初中英语写作的经典题型，能有效检验学生的语言运用和内容整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
写作指导
1.本文是一封邮件。 2.时态为一般现在时。
3.根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
↓
详细介绍 → I am a student in the eighth grade...
We spend about hour doing our homework every day...
↓
收篇结尾 → I think my school is great and my school life is colourful.
答案：Dear David,
How is everything going these days?
Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I am a student in the eighth grade. Our school is very beautiful, with a large green playground and a bright library full of different kinds of books. We have 4 classes in the morning and 3 in the afternoon. My favourite lessons are Chinese and physics, they are very interesting. We spend about one hour doing our homework every day, so we have much free time to join different school clubs. I am a member of the school music club, I practice playing the guitar with my friends there every Tuesday afternoon. All my teachers and classmates are very nice to me, I always have a good time at school.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful.
Would you like to tell me something about your school life in your next email?
Yours,
Zhang Ming
解析：
【分析】
本题要求写一封邮件，需遵循邮件格式，使用一般现在时，以第一人称为主，按照给定的“开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾”结构完成写作。首先确定邮件的开头称呼、问候语和结尾的邀请语、署名；开篇直接用指定句子点题；详细介绍部分围绕八年级学生身份，补充学校环境、课程、作业时间、课余活动等细节，不遗漏要点；收篇用指定句子收尾，确保内容完整。
【解析】
1. 确定邮件格式：开头写称呼（如Dear David）和问候语（How is everything going these days?），结尾补充邀请对方分享学校生活的内容，最后署名（Yours, Zhang Ming）；
2. 开篇点题：使用题目指定句子Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.；
3. 详细介绍：围绕八年级学生身份，补充学校的环境（如操场、图书馆）、课程安排、喜欢的科目、作业时间（one hour）、课余社团活动、师生同学情况等内容，全程用一般现在时和第一人称；
4. 收篇结尾：使用题目指定句子I think my school is great and my school life is colourful.，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear David,
How is everything going these days?
Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I am a student in the eighth grade. Our school is very beautiful, with a large green playground and a bright library full of different kinds of books. We have 4 classes in the morning and 3 in the afternoon. My favourite lessons are Chinese and physics, they are very interesting. We spend about one hour doing our homework every day, so we have much free time to join different school clubs. I am a member of the school music club, I practice playing the guitar with my friends there every Tuesday afternoon. All my teachers and classmates are very nice to me, I always have a good time at school.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful.
Would you like to tell me something about your school life in your next email?
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般现在时运用、要点式写作
【点评】
本题考查初中英语邮件写作能力，要求学生掌握邮件基本格式，能根据给定要点补充合理内容，运用正确时态和第一人称，锻炼书面表达能力，是初中阶段基础写作题型，贴合学生学习实际。
【难度系数】
0.5
