假如你是John,你校试行在课间播放音乐。你班同学对此进行了讨论,看法不一。大多数同学赞同,而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,给你们的校长写一封信,介绍大家的观点,同时谈谈自己的看法。

【要求】
1. 词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 完整表达表格中的提示内容,句式规范,字迹工整。
3. 可以适当发挥,使条理清晰,内容完整,意思连贯。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:学习效率 study efficiency;预期的 expected;沉浸在……中 be lost in...
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.
All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
答案:One possible version
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
解析:
【分析】
首先明确写作任务:以John的身份给校长写一封信,介绍班级关于课间播放音乐的讨论观点,需涵盖赞同者的原因、反对者的原因,以及自己的看法,同时要遵循书信格式,控制词数。解题思路:1. 承接已给开头,说明班级讨论的整体情况;2. 分点阐述赞同者的三个原因(带来快乐、放松大脑、提高学习效率);3. 分点阐述反对者的两个原因(课间时间短无预期效果、影响上课);4. 表达自己的观点,适当补充内容;5. 按要求完成书信结尾。
【解析】
按照书信结构依次写作:
1. 开头承接:说明班级对课间播放音乐展开了讨论,所有同学都表达了想法;
2. 赞同者观点:用“Most of us agree...”引出,分别说明音乐能带来快乐、帮助放松、提高学习效率;
3. 反对者观点:用“But some students disagree...”引出,说明课间时间短达不到预期效果,部分同学上课还沉浸在音乐中影响学习;
4. 自己的观点:表达更需要安静而非音乐,不喜欢课间播放音乐,最后询问校长的想法;
5. 结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
【知识点】
英语书信写作;观点表达;词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书面表达的能力,要求清晰传递不同群体的观点,符合书信格式规范,是初中英语常见的写作题型,注重语言的准确性和连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.7