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(2026·江苏徐州铜山区一模改编)在成长的过程中,总有一些让我们感到恐惧的事情,如害怕某种动物,害怕在众人面前发言……只有克服恐惧才能帮助我们成长。请根据下面,以“Overcome fear”为主题写一篇短文投稿至“校园成长”英语栏目。
【要求】
1. 词数90左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 所写内容应包括所给要点,可适当发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I.
I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.

To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day.

I also tried to answer questions actively in class.

Little by little, I became more confident.

Now I no longer fear public speaking.

I feel proud of myself for making such a big change.

Overcoming fear makes me braver.

and helps me grow better.



答案:One possible version
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
解析:
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达题,主题为“克服恐惧”,要求围绕三个核心要点(害怕的事物、克服恐惧的做法、改变后的感受)写作,需结合给定首句,词数90左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取贴合学生生活的恐惧点(如当众发言);2. 说明恐惧的原因;3. 具体阐述克服恐惧的行动;4. 表达改变后的感受及成长意义,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺连贯。
【解析】写作时,先承接首句,明确自己的恐惧是当众发言,说明担忧(怕出错被嘲笑);接着写克服的具体方法:每天对着镜子反复练习,课堂主动回答问题;最后写现在的状态(不再害怕当众发言),表达对自己的自豪及克服恐惧带来的成长,控制词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
【知识点】英语话题作文、成长主题写作、要点覆盖写作
【点评】本题结合学生成长经历,引导学生反思自我,紧扣给定要点,内容真实可感,符合校园栏目的定位,考查学生的英语表达与逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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