(2026·江苏徐州三校调研)生活是一位睿智的长者,生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对,无论是美好还是意外,我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请根据以下要点提示,以“Life is full of
”为题写一篇短文,分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
【要点】
1. 请先将标题填写完整。
2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
【要求】
1. 词数100左右,短文开头已给出部分,请填写完整,不计入总词数。
2. 内容须涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现与学生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Life is full of
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of
. It is the
that make me stronger.
答案:One possible version
Life is full of challenges
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
I moved to the city when I entered middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself.
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I will face the coming difficulties bravely, and I won't give up no matter how hard they will be.
解析:
【分析】
首先需补全标题,选择贴近生活且易展开的主题,如“challenges”;接着围绕主题分享一次有特殊意义的经历,需体现克服困难的过程;最后结合经历谈感悟,确保涵盖所有要点,语言通顺,符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 补全标题:Life is full of challenges;
2. 衔接开头:用给定开头引出主题,点明挑战能让人成长;
3. 分享经历:讲述初中搬家后父母晚归,自己克服困难学做饭的具体过程;
4. 谈感悟:从经历中提炼面对困难要自信、不放弃的道理,贴合主题。
【答案】
Life is full of challenges
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
I moved to the city when I entered middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself.
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I will face the coming difficulties bravely, and I won't give up no matter how hard they will be.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
该作文补全标题合理,经历真实具体,感悟贴合主题,涵盖所有要点,语言通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.5