六、书面表达(满分20分)(2025·江苏宿迁调研)
假如在众多课余爱好中,你最喜欢和朋友一起去电影院看电影。请根据以下提示以“My favourite hobby—going to the cinema”为题写一篇英语短文。

【要求】
1. 语言规范,信息完整,结构连贯,书写工整。
2. 词数100左右,内容必须包括表格中的所有信息,并作适当发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
答案:One possible version
My favourite hobby—going to the cinema
Among all my hobbies, going to the cinema with friends is my favourite thing to do.
First, the big screen and amazing sound effects help me forget my school pressure and get lost in stories. What's more, I love documentaries, which open my eyes to nature and history, making me love life more. In addition, I've learned about great directors like Steven Spielberg, who is good at adventure films and cares about humanity and peace.
However, I have problems too. It's hard to find time with friends because we are busy with our study. My parents also worry that going to the cinema frequently will affect my study, so they don't support me much.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“My favourite hobby—going to the cinema”为题写英语短文,需包含表格中所有信息,适当发挥,词数100左右。解题思路:1. 开头直接点明最喜欢的爱好是和朋友去电影院;2. 分点阐述喜欢去电影院的理由,对应表格中的三点内容,用合适的连接词串联;3. 说明存在的问题,对应表格中的两点,用转折词引出;4. 确保语言规范,信息完整,结构连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:直接点题,说明在所有爱好中,和朋友去电影院是自己最喜欢的事;
2. 阐述喜欢的理由:① 电影院的大屏幕和震撼音效能帮助忘记学习压力,沉浸在故事里;② 喜欢纪录片,能了解自然和历史,开阔眼界,更热爱生活;③ 认识优秀导演如Steven Spielberg,他擅长冒险电影,关注人性与和平;
3. 说明存在的问题:① 忙于学业,很难和朋友找到共同时间看电影;② 家长担心常去电影院影响学习,不太支持;
4. 用恰当的连接词使文章连贯,控制词数在100左右,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
My favourite hobby—going to the cinema
Among all my hobbies, going to the cinema with friends is my favourite thing to do.
First, the big screen and amazing sound effects help me forget my school pressure and get lost in stories. What's more, I love documentaries, which open my eyes to nature and history, making me love life more. In addition, I've learned about great directors like Steven Spielberg, who is good at adventure films and cares about humanity and peace.
However, I have problems too. It's hard to find time with friends because we are busy with our study. My parents also worry that going to the cinema frequently will affect my study, so they don't support me much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,要点整合,语篇连贯
【点评】
本文覆盖了题目要求的所有信息,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,使用合适的连接词串联内容,语言规范,符合词数要求,是一篇标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5