高分范文
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| My best friend
My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
Now she lives in Suqian with her parents. ①She enjoys the life here.
Suqian is beautiful and the people are friendly.
②She wears glasses. She looks very lovely. | My best friend
My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
Now she lives in Suqian with her parents. ①She enjoys the life here because the city is beautiful and the people are friendly.
→用because引导的原因状语从句升格
②She looks very lovely with glasses.
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续表
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| Her favourite subject is English. ③ She always helps me with my English.
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. We often play volleyball in the playground after school. We often have a good time together.
④I have a good friend. I'm really lucky. | Her favourite subject is English. ③She is always ready to help me with my English.
→用短语be ready to do sth升格
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. We often play volleyball in the playground after school. We often have a good time together.
④I'm really lucky to have such a good friend.
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实战演练
开学已经有一段时间了,请根据表格中的信息以“This is me”为题写一篇英语短文,向你的同学介绍自己。
基本信息：Daniel;13岁;来自姜堰;在阳光中学七年级(9)班学习
外貌：短发;不戴眼镜……(至少发挥一点)
最喜欢的科目：喜欢……学科,原因(至少一点)
兴趣爱好：喜欢篮球,原因(至少一点)
理想：希望……
【要求】1.80词左右。
2.内容必须包括表格中的要点并适当发挥,要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel,