B. 写作。(满分15分)
本学期已经进入尾声,春节即将到来。假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Betty想要了解你的春节计划。请根据下面的表格内容,用英语写一封邮件给Betty。
春节
非常重要的节日,通常在1月或2月。
服饰
传统的中国服饰,例如汉服、旗袍。
习俗
春节前:①大扫除,贴
春联;②……
春节期间:①走亲访友,互赠美好祝福;②……
压岁钱
①大部分花在书本、笔和食物上;②也会用来……
【注意】1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包含表格中所有信息,并适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Betty,
I haven't seen you for a long time. I am looking forward to the Spring Festival. I would like to tell you something about this festival and my plan to celebrate it.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
答案:B. One possible version
Dear Betty,
I haven't seen you for a long time. I am looking forward to the Spring Festival. I would like to tell you something about this festival and my plan to celebrate it.
The Spring Festival is a very important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, we usually clean the house and put up the Spring Festival couplets. We also buy new clothes. We usually wear some traditional Chinese clothes like hanfu and qipao. During the festival, we visit our relatives and friends and give each other good wishes. We always have a big family dinner together.
I can get lots of lucky money during the festival. I usually spend most of it on books, pens and food. I also use some to buy small gifts for my family.
I'm really excited about the Spring Festival. I hope you can come to China to celebrate it one day.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Betty写邮件介绍春节计划。解题思路:首先明确邮件受众为笔友,语气需亲切自然;其次梳理表格所有要点(春节的地位与时间、传统服饰、节前习俗、节日期间习俗、压岁钱使用),并适当补充符合春节习俗的合理细节;最后用合适的连接词串联内容,确保语法正确、上下文连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 确定邮件结构:开头已给出,中间依次介绍春节相关内容,结尾呼应邀请对方;2. 覆盖所有表格要点:说明春节是中国重要节日,时间在1-2月;提及传统服饰汉服、旗袍;节前补充买新衣,习俗为大扫除、贴春联;节日期间补充家庭大餐,习俗为走亲访友、互送祝福;压岁钱用于书本、笔、食物,还可给家人买小礼物;3. 使用连接词(before, during)使内容连贯,调整语气符合笔友交流的亲切感,控制词数在要求范围内,确保无真实信息泄露。
【答案】One possible version
Dear Betty,
I haven't seen you for a long time. I am looking forward to the Spring Festival. I would like to tell you something about this festival and my plan to celebrate it.
The Spring Festival is a very important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, we usually clean the house and put up the Spring Festival couplets. We also buy new clothes. We usually wear some traditional Chinese clothes like hanfu and qipao. During the festival, we visit our relatives and friends and give each other good wishes. We always have a big family dinner together.
I can get lots of lucky money during the festival. I usually spend most of it on books, pens and food. I also use some to buy small gifts for my family.
I'm really excited about the Spring Festival. I hope you can come to China to celebrate it one day.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、节日话题英语表达
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,补充了符合春节习俗的合理细节,语气亲切自然符合笔友间的交流风格,语法正确、上下文连贯,词数符合要求,是一篇优秀的应试作文。
【难度系数】0.6