主题写作专项 练写作 答案D31
主题词网
优选词汇
邀请 · invite...to... · would like to · be welcome to... · invitation to... · why not · how about
活动 · speech · meeting · training · social · event · take place
安排 · show sb. around · find out · pay attention to · offer · sign · keep (...)away from...
期待 · look forward to · one’s reply · hope to... · an honour to do... · can’t wait to · be excited to...
写作实例
「2026 重庆南岸期末」
→审人称：以第一人称为主
寒假即将来临,请以 Teng Fei 的名义,参考表格里①②③点信息,写一封邀请函,邀请 Peter 来重庆和你一起度假。
→审主题
| ①Introduction | one month, weather, food... |
| ②Event details | plans, an opportunity to..., b
are to... |
| ③Ending | a great honour to have you... |
要求:80 词左右。
→审时态: 以一般现在时为主
审要点
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
写作支架
开头 — 第一段: 表达邀请意图并说明时间 → I would like... Our winter vacation lasts about
, which will be a perfect time to
.
中间 — 第二段: 简单介绍当地的天气情况,说明具体的活动安排 → The weather is quite
. We can not only
, but also
. What’s more, if you would like, we could also
and
.（高分句式1）
结尾 — 第三段: 点明此行的意义,提醒对方准备物品,表达诚挚期待 → This trip will be a good opportunity for you to
. Be sure to pack
and bring
. It would be a great honour to have you here.（高分句式2）I really look forward to
!
优秀范文
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Our winter vacation lasts about one month, which① will be a perfect time to enjoy Chongqing together.
The weather is quite mild. We can not only taste delicious local food like hot pot but also② visit interesting places. What’s more, if you would like③, we could also take a mountain light rail ride and explore museums.
This trip will be a good opportunity④ for you to experience Chinese culture④ and practice language skills④. Be sure to pack some warm clothes and bring a camera. It would be a great honour to have you here.⑤ I really look forward to④ spending the holiday with you!
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
亮点评析
①用 which 引导定语从句对寒假进行补充说明,自然地引出“这是共游重庆的好时机”;
②用 not only...but also...点明此次旅游的活动安排;
③用 if 条件句既给出了额外活动选项,又充分尊重对方的意愿,体现了邀请的诚意;
④ 用 opportunity、experience Chinese culture、practice language skills、look forward to 体现了作者较为扎实的词汇储备;
⑤用 It would be a great honour to...句式表达荣幸之情。
