九、短文写作。
上周,校园科技节举办了“变废为宝”创意大赛。根据问题提示,写一篇短文介绍你的作品,不少于9句。
• What did you make?
• What did you use to make different parts?
• How did you create your work?
• How did you feel?
• What do you think of reusing old things?
I made
for the school Science Festival.
答案:示例: I made a solar light for the school Science Festival. I made it with old things. The top part was an old solar panel from a broken garden light. The main body was a clean empty glass bottle. I also got a small light from a broken lamp. I cleaned all the parts first. Then I put every piece together carefully. I tried many times. It was difficult, but I did not give up. Finally, my solar light really worked! When I showed it, I felt proud and happy. Reusing can give old things a new life. I can help our Mother Earth in this way.
解析:
【分析】这是一篇提示性英语短文写作,需围绕校园科技节“变废为宝”创意大赛的作品介绍展开,要覆盖题目给出的5个问题提示,且不少于9句。解题思路:1. 开篇点明自己制作的作品;2. 依次说明作品各部分使用的废旧材料;3. 描述制作的具体过程;4. 表达制作后的感受;5. 阐述对旧物再利用的看法,确保语篇连贯,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】按照提示要点组织连贯短文,先点明作品,再分述材料、制作步骤、感受和观点,确保句子数量达标,语言准确。具体内容如下:I made a solar light for the school Science Festival. I made it with old things. The top part was an old solar panel from a broken garden light. The main body was a clean empty glass bottle. I also got a small light from a broken lamp. I cleaned all the parts first. Then I put every piece together carefully. I tried many times. It was difficult, but I did not give up. Finally, my solar light really worked! When I showed it, I felt proud and happy. Reusing can give old things a new life. I can help our Mother Earth in this way.
【答案】I made a solar light for the school Science Festival. I made it with old things. The top part was an old solar panel from a broken garden light. The main body was a clean empty glass bottle. I also got a small light from a broken lamp. I cleaned all the parts first. Then I put every piece together carefully. I tried many times. It was difficult, but I did not give up. Finally, my solar light really worked! When I showed it, I felt proud and happy. Reusing can give old things a new life. I can help our Mother Earth in this way.
【知识点】英语短文写作、提示性写作
【点评】本题围绕校园科技节“变废为宝”主题,通过提示要点考查学生的英语语篇组织能力,要求覆盖所有问题并连贯表达,同时渗透环保意识,是基础写作能力的综合考查。
【难度系数】0.6