二、书面表达
假设你是李华,新学期你们班级要选举新班长(monitor),请你向班主任张老师推荐王然,并结合“认识自我、发挥优势”的主题和相关具体事例,写一封90词左右的推荐信。推荐信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。推荐理由可考虑以下几点:
1. 学习力强,善用AI技术提升自我;
2. 勇于表达,乐于助人且团结同学;
3. 协作力强,擅长领导与组织活动。
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend Wang Ran for the new monitor this term. He has all the qualities for the position.
First, he is a quick learner. He teaches himself AI technology and uses it to improve his studies. He is also creative and often comes up with different new ideas. What’s more, he is never afraid to speak up for what is right. He is always willing to give his classmates a helping hand and cooperate well with them. Last but not least, he has a good sense of teamwork. He is not only an excellent leader but also an outstanding organizer in a team.
For all of these reasons, I believe that Wang Ran is the right choice for the new monitor. I hope you consider him for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案:Sample writing:
First, he is a quick learner. He teaches himself AI technology and uses it to improve his studies. He is also creative and often comes up with different new ideas. What’s more, he is never afraid to speak up for what is right. He is always willing to give his classmates a helping hand and cooperate well with them. Last but not least, he has a good sense of teamwork. He is not only an excellent leader but also an outstanding organizer in a team.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的推荐信写作任务,要求以李华的身份向班主任张老师推荐王然担任新班长,需结合给定的三个推荐理由(学习力强善用AI技术、勇于表达且团结同学、协作力强擅长组织领导),紧扣“认识自我、发挥优势”主题,字数控制在90词左右,且开头和结尾已给出。解题思路:①承接开头句,用First引出第一个理由,结合“自学AI技术提升学习”的具体事例,体现其发挥学习优势;②用What’s more衔接第二个理由,通过“敢于表达正确观点、乐于助人、与同学相处融洽”的事例,体现其自我认知的优点;③用Last but not least引出第三个理由,以“优秀的领导者和组织者”的事例,体现其协作与组织优势;④选用合适的连接词串联内容,控制字数,语言符合书信的正式自然语气,完成推荐信主体内容。
【解析】
按照写作要求,步骤如下:1.承接开头,用First引出第一个推荐理由:王然学习能力强,自学AI技术并运用到学习中提升自己,体现其发挥学习优势;2.用What’s more衔接第二个理由:他敢于表达正确观点,乐于助人且与同学相处融洽,体现其自我认知的优点;3.用Last but not least引出第三个理由:他具备良好的团队协作意识,是优秀的领导者和组织者,体现其组织领导优势;4.整体语言简洁流畅,符合90词左右的要求,紧扣主题,完成推荐信内容。
【答案】
First, he is a quick learner. He teaches himself AI technology and uses it to improve his studies. He is also creative and often comes up with different new ideas. What’s more, he is never afraid to speak up for what is right. He is always willing to give his classmates a helping hand and cooperate well with them. Last but not least, he has a good sense of teamwork. He is not only an excellent leader but also an outstanding organizer in a team.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语书面表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园选举班长的真实场景,考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求结合指定理由和主题,体现英语应用的实用性,需学生准确运用连接词串联内容,紧扣要点,语言通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6