写作范例
My Grandparents’ Farm
Hello, my name is Teng Fei. My grandparents have a big farm. They have many kinds of animals on the farm. They are pigs, chickens, ducks, rabbits, cows, horses, and sheep. Oh, there is a dog too. How many chickens do my grandparents have? Let me count. One, two, three ... You can see a big house on the farm. It’s my grandparents’ house. I like my grandparents’ farm. Do you like it?
写作任务
假设你是李华,你的叔叔有一个院子,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文,介绍一下这个院子。
写作要求:
1. 条理清楚,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于60词。
My Uncle’s Yard
| Plants | Animals | Others |
| --- | --- | --- |
| tomato plants
apple trees
flowers | four rabbits

nine ducks
two geese
a dog | ... |
My Uncle’s Yard
My name is Li Hua. My uncle has a big yard. You can see a lot of plants and animals in it. What are they? They are tomato plants, apple trees, and beautiful flowers.
What else does my uncle have? He has four rabbits, nine ducks, and two geese. Oh, he has a dog too. It’s cute.
I have fun in my uncle’s yard and I like his yard very much.
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇英语应用文写作题,要求根据给定表格内容介绍叔叔的院子。解题思路:1. 开头点明身份(李华)和叔叔院子的存在;2. 分两部分介绍院子里的植物(番茄植株、苹果树、花)和动物(四只兔子、九只鸭子、两只鹅、一只狗),可适当添加形容词让语句更生动;3. 结尾表达对院子的喜爱,确保语句通顺、字数达标。
【解析】
按照写作要求,先介绍自己和叔叔的院子,再列举表格中的植物和动物,最后抒发情感。具体步骤:
1. 开头:My name is Li Hua. My uncle has a big yard.
2. 介绍植物:You can see many plants in it, including tomato plants, apple trees and beautiful flowers.
3. 介绍动物:He also has some lovely animals: four rabbits, nine ducks, two geese and a cute dog.
4. 结尾:I have fun in this yard and I like my uncle’s yard very much.
【答案】
My Uncle’s Yard
My name is Li Hua. My uncle has a big yard. You can see a lot of plants and animals in it. What are they? They are tomato plants, apple trees, and beautiful flowers. What else does my uncle have? He has four rabbits, nine ducks, and two geese. Oh, he has a dog too. It’s cute.
I have fun in my uncle’s yard and I like his yard very much.
【知识点】
英语写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合表格信息进行写作,考查学生的信息整合与英语表达能力,要求条理清晰,符合日常写作规范,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3