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My New Year’s Resolutions
表明写作意图;引出自己的新年决心
I’d like to tell you about my New Year’s resolutions.
逐步介绍自己的新年决心
健康:I’m going to eat healthier food and take more exercise.
加入校足球队:I’m going to practise football every day.
培养新的爱好:I’m going to take up a new hobby like reading.
沟通问题:I’ll talk to my parents or friends.
表明自己会坚定执行新年的决心
All in all, I will keep my resolutions so I can be a better person.
写作范例
My New Year’s Resolutions
Hello, my name is Zhang Ping. I am a student in Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. The new year is coming. It’s a good time to make resolutions. I’d like to tell you about my New Year’s resolutions.
My first resolution is about physical health. I’m going to eat healthier food and take more exercise. I hope I will be healthier this year than last year. Also, I want to join the school football team. I’m going to practise football every day. The second resolution is about self-improvement. I’m going to take up a new hobby like reading. I hope to get good grades, so I will study harder. Last but not least, my last resolution is about sharing problems. If I have problems and worries, I’ll talk to my parents or friends because sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
All in all, I will keep my resolutions so I can be a better person.
答案:My New Year’s Resolutions
Hello, my name is Zhang Ping. I am a student in Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. The new year is coming. It’s a good time to make resolutions. I’d like to tell you about my New Year’s resolutions.
My first resolution is about physical health. I’m going to eat healthier food and take more exercise. I hope I will be healthier this year than last year. Also, I want to join the school football team. I’m going to practise football every day. The second resolution is about self-improvement. I’m going to take up a new hobby like reading. I hope to get good grades, so I will study harder. Last but not least, my last resolution is about sharing problems. If I have problems and worries, I’ll talk to my parents or friends because sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
All in all, I will keep my resolutions so I can be a better person.
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My New Year’s Resolutions”,需遵循思维导图的逻辑结构:第一步引出写作意图,说明要介绍自己的新年决心;第二步分点阐述具体决心,涵盖健康(健康饮食+锻炼)、加入校足球队(每日练习)、培养新爱好(阅读)、沟通问题(向亲友倾诉)四个方面;第三步总结表态,表明会坚持决心成为更好的人。写作时需注意用合适的过渡词衔接各部分,确保内容连贯、符合英语写作规范。
【解析】按照思维导图结构组织内容:开篇点明新年将至,引出要介绍新年决心;接着分层次展开:①健康维度:计划吃更健康的食物、多锻炼,还打算加入校足球队,每天练习足球;②自我提升维度:培养阅读的新爱好;③沟通维度:遇到问题时和父母或朋友倾诉;最后补充合理的衔接语句(如表达对健康的期望、说明倾诉的意义),总结要坚持决心成为更好的人,形成完整流畅的短文。
【答案】My New Year’s Resolutions
Hello, my name is Zhang Ping. I am a student in Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. The new year is coming. It’s a good time to make resolutions. I’d like to tell you about my New Year’s resolutions.
My first resolution is about physical health. I’m going to eat healthier food and take more exercise. I hope I will be healthier this year than last year. Also, I want to join the school football team. I’m going to practise football every day. The second resolution is about self-improvement. I’m going to take up a new hobby like reading. I hope to get good grades, so I will study harder. Last but not least, my last resolution is about sharing problems. If I have problems and worries, I’ll talk to my parents or friends because sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
All in all, I will keep my resolutions so I can be a better person.
【知识点】英语写作、英语篇章结构、英语常用表达
【点评】这篇范文结构清晰,紧扣新年决心的主题,涵盖了健康、自我提升、沟通等常见维度,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作的要求,是一篇优质的写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
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