写作任务
科技发展日新月异,同时也在改变我们的生活方式。请根据以下提示,以“Technology Changes Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文章中需包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Technology Changes Life
Health care will be more convenient ...
Education won’t go to school ...
Transportation

ll be more efficient ...
Communication will be easier ...
Home life will be smarter ...
... ...
Technology Changes Life
Technology is changing our lives in many ways.
答案:参考范文:
Technology Changes Life
Technology is changing our lives in many ways. And the future will be even better.
Health care will be more convenient. We can talk to doctors online at home, so we won't wait in long hospital lines. Education will change too. Students won't go to school every day. Instead, they will have online classes and learn with classmates from other places. Transportation will be faster. Self-driving cars and high-speed trains will help us get to places quickly. Communication will be easier. We can video-call friends who live far away anytime. At home, smart robots will do housework, and we can control lights or TVs with our voices.
Truly, technology makes our lives more convenient and fun!
解析:
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题,要求以“Technology Changes Life”为题,围绕医疗、教育、交通、通讯、家庭生活五个领域展开,需承接已给开头,补充合理细节,控制词数80左右,确保覆盖所有要点且行文连贯。写作时先承接开头引出未来科技带来的积极变化,再分领域阐述具体改变,最后总结科技对生活的影响,保证内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】1. 承接已给开头,引出未来科技将让生活更美好的观点;2. 依次展开各要点:医疗领域补充“线上问诊,无需排队”;教育领域补充“线上课程,与各地同学学习”;交通领域补充“自动驾驶汽车、高铁,出行更高效”;通讯领域补充“视频通话,随时联系远方亲友”;家庭领域补充“智能机器人做家务,语音控制家电”;3. 最后总结科技让生活更便利有趣,符合词数要求,语言流畅自然。
【答案】Technology Changes Life
Technology is changing our lives in many ways. And the future will be even better.
Health care will be more convenient. We can talk to doctors online at home, so we won't wait in long hospital lines. Education will change too. Students won't go to school every day. Instead, they will have online classes and learn with classmates from other places. Transportation will be faster. Self-driving cars and high-speed trains will help us get to places quickly. Communication will be easier. We can video-call friends who live far away anytime. At home, smart robots will do housework, and we can control lights or TVs with our voices.
Truly, technology makes our lives more convenient and fun!
【知识点】英语话题写作、科技类英语表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有给定要点,补充的细节贴合科技发展实际,语言简洁流畅,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6