
写作范例
Good Communication
Good communication plays an important role in our life. I believe that the most useful skill for communicating better is to respect others. Last year, I went travelling with my good friend. When we made the plans, we disagreed with each other. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought about it and realized that his advice was actually pretty good. We should respect each other. I said sorry to him, and then we had a good trip. Since then, our relationship has become closer. In my opinion, everyone should learn how to get along well with others. We should learn to listen and understand others. We should also respect others politely. I believe that learning to communicate plays an important role in our life.
写作任务
假设你发现班里有两位好朋友因为一场小小的误会,最近不再互相说话。你认为良好的沟通对友谊非常重要。请你以一位关心他们的同学的身份,写一封80词左右的英文信(开头已给出),分享化解误会的想法和建议。
写作提示:
1. 提及你选择写这封信作为沟通方式的原因;
2. 表达你相信通过良好沟通可以改善关系的希望。
写作要求:
1. 根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Lin Tao and Wang Wei,
I'm writing to you both because I care about your friendship.
You haven't been talking lately, and I believe good communication can solve misunderstandings.
I chose to write because sometimes it's easier to share thoughts in a letter. Here are my suggestions:
If you take the first step to talk, you will break the silence.
If you listen carefully to each other, you can understand both sides of the story.
If you share your true feelings calmly, it will help clear up the confusion.
I really hope you can talk soon. Good communication will make your friendship even stronger. Sincerely, A caring classmate
解析:
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作任务,要求以关心同学的身份,给因误会不再交流的两位同学写一封建议信。解题思路:1. 紧扣写作提示,需说明写信的原因(如书信更易表达想法),给出化解误会的沟通建议,表达对两人关系改善的希望;2. 围绕“良好沟通”主题,结合范例中的沟通技巧(主动沟通、倾听、表达感受)组织内容;3. 注意书信格式,控制字数,避免出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】首先承接开头句,说明写信原因(如“Writing a letter helps you share true feelings without awkwardness”);接着给出具体建议:主动迈出沟通第一步、认真倾听对方想法、平静分享自身感受;最后表达希望,强调良好沟通能修复友谊。语言简洁,符合初中英语水平,字数约80词。
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Lin Tao and Wang Wei,
I'm writing to you both because I care about your friendship. You haven't been talking lately, and I believe good communication can solve misunderstandings.
I chose to write because sometimes it's easier to share thoughts in a letter. Here are my suggestions:
If you take the first step to talk, you will break the silence.
If you listen carefully to each other, you can understand both sides of the story.
If you share your true feelings calmly, it will help clear up the confusion.
I really hope you can talk soon. Good communication will make your friendship even stronger.
Sincerely,
A caring classmate
【知识点】英语书信写作、英语话题写作(沟通与友谊)、英语建议表达
【点评】本题结合学生真实生活场景,考查学生运用英语解决实际社交问题的能力,既要求学生掌握书信格式与写作技巧,又渗透了人际交往的教育意义,是实用性较强的写作题。
【难度系数】0.5