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假如你是李华,你的英国笔友迈克在邮件中写到对你的家庭生活非常感兴趣。请你给迈克回一封电子邮件,向他介绍如下内容:你对“家”的认识;你作为家庭的一员,通常做哪些家务;你和家人一起完成家务或共度时光时的感受。
写作要求:
语句通顺,不少于80词,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your email. I am glad to tell you something about my family life.











Yours,
Li Hua
答案:参考范文:
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your email. I am glad to tell you something about my family life. To me, home is like a warm harbour and a small team where everyone supports each other. It is not just a place to live, but also a source of love and strength.
As a member of the family, I often help with housework. I usually make my bed, fold the clothes, and sometimes wash the dishes after dinner. On weekends, I also help my parents sweep the floor or water the plants.
When we do housework together, I feel happy and close to my parents. We talk and share stories while working, which makes the chores less boring. Spending time with my family always fills my heart with warmth and joy. It reminds me how lucky I am to be part of such a loving home.
I hope this gives you a clearer picture of my life at home. I'd love to hear about your family too!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求的三个核心内容:对“家”的认识、自身承担的家务、与家人相处的感受,且需使用给定的开头结尾,词数不少于80。写作时先承接开头引出主题,再分三部分展开:①用比喻等手法表达对家的理解;②列举具体的日常家务;③描述和家人相处的感受,最后收尾邀请笔友分享他的家庭,确保语句连贯、符合邮件的亲切语气。
【解析】
1. 开头使用题目给定内容,自然引出家庭生活的介绍;
2. 阐述对家的认识:将家比作温暖的港湾和互相支持的小团队,点明家是爱与力量的源泉;
3. 说明自身承担的家务:列举日常整理床铺、叠衣服、洗碗,周末扫地、浇花等具体内容;
4. 表达感受:结合和家人做家务时的聊天、分享,体现亲近与温暖,突出家庭的意义;
5. 结尾呼应主题,邀请笔友分享他的家庭,完成邮件写作,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your email. I am glad to tell you something about my family life. To me, home is like a warm harbour and a small team where everyone supports each other. It is not just a place to live, but also a source of love and strength.
As a member of the family, I often help with housework. I usually make my bed, fold the clothes, and sometimes wash the dishes after dinner. On weekends, I also help my parents sweep the floor or water the plants.
When we do housework together, I feel happy and close to my parents. We talk and share stories while working, which makes the chores less boring. Spending time with my family always fills my heart with warmth and joy. It reminds me how lucky I am to be part of such a loving home.
I hope this gives you a clearer picture of my life at home. I'd love to hear about your family too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、家庭生活话题写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目所有要求,覆盖了指定的三个要点,语言流畅自然,运用恰当的比喻生动表达对家的理解,细节具体真实,情感真挚,符合邮件的亲切语气,是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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