进入初中以来,同学们在外貌、性格、爱好等方面都感受到了自己的变化,同时在生活和学习中也会遇到一些问题。我校英语角正在以“My Changes”为题进行征文活动,请你根据以下思维导图提示,用英语写一篇谈论自己变化的文章。
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

My Changes
答案:My Changes
Since I entered junior high school, I have taken a lot of changes. I am much taller than before, and I used to be a shy boy/girl, but now I am far more outgoing.
I used to love eating junk food, now I spend more time playing sports after class and I also become interested in singing. But I meet some problems now: I have too much schoolwork and feel stressed, sometimes I can't get on well with my parents. I plan to arrange my time properly and communicate more with them to solve these problems.
解析:
【分析】
本题是英语话题作文,主题为“My Changes”,需依据思维导图的三个核心模块(外貌与性格、习惯与爱好、问题与计划)写作。首先梳理各模块要点:外貌上更高,性格从害羞变为外向;习惯上从爱吃垃圾食品转为爱运动、唱歌;问题是学业压力、与家人相处问题;计划是合理安排时间、多沟通。写作时要运用时态体现变化,覆盖所有要点,控制词数,避免真实信息,保证语句通顺。
【解析】
写作时,先总起说明进入初中后有诸多变化;接着分述外貌与性格的改变(比以前更高,从害羞变得外向);再讲习惯和爱好的变化(不再爱吃垃圾食品,课后花时间运动,还对唱歌产生兴趣);然后提出遇到的问题(学业繁重有压力,有时和父母相处不好);最后说明解决计划(合理安排时间,多和父母沟通),确保覆盖所有要点,用词准确,符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Changes
Since I entered junior high school, I have taken a lot of changes. I am much taller than before, and I used to be a shy boy/girl, but now I am far more outgoing.
I used to love eating junk food, now I spend more time playing sports after class and I also become interested in singing. But I meet some problems now: I have too much schoolwork and feel stressed, sometimes I can't get on well with my parents. I plan to arrange my time properly and communicate more with them to solve these problems.
【知识点】
英语话题写作,时态运用,词汇表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生英语写作能力,贴近学生生活,要求梳理要点并准确表达自身变化,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.6