十四、书面表达。(共10分)
下周你班将举办“如何拥有美好生活”的演讲比赛。请根据提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示:1. keep safe;2. have some hobbies;3. have good habits;4. feel good;5. ...
要求:1. 语句通顺,无语法错误;
2. 不少于50词(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
How to live a good life
Everyone wants to have a good life. Today I'll talk about my good life.
I feel happy every day because
I do well at school and home.
Safety comes first in a good life.
On the stairs, I should keep to the right and I shouldn't run or jump.
I should listen to the teachers in class.
A good life needs some hobbies.
I like singing. It makes me happy.
I also like dancing. It makes me beautiful.
A good life also needs good habits.
I do exercise every day.
I do chores at home. I'm friendly to others.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达(演讲稿),解题思路需紧扣主题“如何拥有美好生活”,结合给定提示(保持安全、培养爱好、养成好习惯、保持好心情等),先承接已给出的开头内容,再分点展开论述,确保语句通顺、语法正确,满足字数要求,符合演讲稿的语气。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接已给内容,说明自己每天快乐的原因(对应“feel good”);2. 围绕“keep safe”,列举具体安全行为(如楼梯靠右行、不跑跳、课堂认真听讲);3. 围绕“have some hobbies”,举例自己的爱好(唱歌、跳舞)及带来的好处;4. 围绕“have good habits”,列举好习惯(每天锻炼、做家务、友善待人);5. 检查语句通顺,无语法错误,满足不少于50词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to live a good life
Everyone wants to have a good life. Today I'll talk about my good life.
I feel happy every day because I do well at school and home. Safety comes first in a good life. On the stairs, I should keep to the right and I shouldn't run or jump. I should listen to the teachers in class. A good life needs some hobbies. I like singing. It makes me happy. I also like dancing. It makes me beautiful. A good life also needs good habits. I do exercise every day. I do chores at home. I'm friendly to others.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求围绕指定主题结合提示完成演讲稿,内容贴合主题,语言通顺,符合初中英语写作的常见题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5