十四、书面表达。(共4分)
学校正在举办“My wonderful life”主题征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的生活。
要求:1. 介绍你的好习惯和保持安全的做法;
2. 写一写你周末通常做什么以及你的爱好;
3. 写一写你最喜欢的节日以及如何庆祝。
注意:1. 时态主要使用一般现在时;2. 语句通顺,书写规范;3. 不少于60词。
My wonderful life
Hi, I'm Tommy.
I have many good habits. I always get up early and eat healthy food. I know safety is important, so I never run on the stairs. At weekends, I often read books and play basketball with my friends. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. At this festival, I usually eat jiaozi and visit my grandparents with my family. I enjoy my life very much.
答案:One possible version:
My wonderful life
Hi, I'm Tommy. I have many good habits. I always get up early and eat healthy food. I know safety is important, so I never run on the stairs. At weekends, I often read books and play basketball with my friends. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. At this festival, I usually eat jiaozi and visit my grandparents with my family. I enjoy my life very much.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“My wonderful life”,需满足三个核心要求:①介绍自身好习惯及安全做法;②说明周末活动与爱好;③阐述最喜欢的节日及庆祝方式。写作时需以一般现在时为主,语句通顺,词数不少于60,紧扣主题,覆盖所有要求的要点即可完成写作。
【解析】写作时先承接已给出的开头“Hi, I'm Tommy.”,依次展开内容:首先介绍好习惯(早起、吃健康食物)和安全做法(不在楼梯奔跑);接着说明周末活动(读书、和朋友打篮球);然后介绍最喜欢的节日(春节)及庆祝方式(吃饺子、和家人看望祖父母);最后表达对生活的喜爱,确保时态为一般现在时,语句通顺,要点齐全。
【答案】My wonderful life
Hi, I'm Tommy. I have many good habits. I always get up early and eat healthy food. I know safety is important, so I never run on the stairs. At weekends, I often read books and play basketball with my friends. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. At this festival, I usually eat jiaozi and visit my grandparents with my family. I enjoy my life very much.
【知识点】英语书面表达;一般现在时;节日话题写作
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,时态运用准确,语句通顺自然,符合英语写作规范,是一篇合格的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.5