十二、书面表达。(共5分)
学校英语社团正在举办以“My changes”为题的征文活动,请你结合本学期所学内容,写一篇短文介绍自己的成长与变化。
My changes
答案:One possible version:
My changes
I have learned a lot this term. I know I should try my best and never give up when I meet difficulties. Before I was afraid to speak in front of people. Now I'm brave.
I think honesty is important. I will not tell lies. If I do something wrong, I will say sorry and correct it.
I love my family. I often help my grandparents do chores at home. I am nice to my classmates too.
To live a green life, I save water and electricity. I sometimes forgot to turn off the lights when I left the classroom. Now I always remember to turn off the lights. Before I often threw away old things. Now I often reuse old things to make new gifts.
How wonderful our life is! I will keep being a good kid.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“My changes”,要求介绍本学期的成长与变化。解题思路:1. 核心是通过“过去”与“现在”的对比,展现自身在性格、品德、生活习惯等方面的变化;2. 结构安排:开头总述本学期的变化,中间分具体方面举例,每个例子用过去和现在的对比;3. 语言要求:使用本学期所学词汇和句式,时态正确(一般过去时表过去,一般现在时/现在完成时表现在);4. 结尾总结,表达积极的成长态度。
【解析】写作遵循“总-分-总”结构:①开头点明本学期收获很多,有诸多变化;②中间分点举例:性格上,过去不敢当众发言,现在变得勇敢;品德上,懂得诚实的重要性,知错能改;生活习惯上,养成节约水电、重复利用旧物的环保习惯;家庭与同学相处上,主动帮家人做家务,对同学友好;③结尾总结,表达会继续保持良好变化的决心。注意语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯,避免语法错误。
【答案】One possible version:
My changes
I have learned a lot this term. I know I should try my best and never give up when I meet difficulties. Before I was afraid to speak in front of people. Now I'm brave.
I think honesty is important. I will not tell lies. If I do something wrong, I will say sorry and correct it.
I love my family. I often help my grandparents do chores at home. I am nice to my classmates too.
To live a green life, I save water and electricity. I sometimes forgot to turn off the lights when I left the classroom. Now I always remember to turn off the lights. Before I often threw away old things. Now I often reuse old things to make new gifts.
How wonderful our life is! I will keep being a good kid.
【知识点】英语书面表达、时态对比应用、个人成长话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题进行英语写作的能力,要求结合自身实际展现成长变化,贴近学生生活,既考查语言运用能力,又引导学生反思成长,符合初中英语教学要求。
【难度系数】0.6