任务情境
青春,是心里有火,眼里有光。作为新时代的中学生,你肯定有自己的理想职业。青春路上,你对未来职业的憧憬是什么?请你以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文,并向校英文报投稿。
提示:
1. What is your dream job?
2. Why do you like this job?
3. How are you going to get your future dream job?
要求:
1. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 80词左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①继续做;反复做
keep on doing sth
②确保;保证
make sure
③尽最大努力
try one's best
④坚持;维持
stick to sth
⑤开始学;开始从事
take up
⑥与……有关系
have (...) to do with sb/sth
⑦最后但同等重要的
last but not least
⑧信息技术工程师
IT engineer
⑨时装设计师
fashion designer
⑩上表演课
take acting classes
2. 句型仿写
①... I want to be a writer when I'm older.
(教材 p.53 2a)
句型:... want(s) to be ... when ...
仿写:我长大了想当一名老师。
I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
②She is going to take acting classes. (教材 p.55 3b)
句型:be going to do sth
仿写:我打算在大学学习如何教学生。
I'm going to study how to teach students at university.
③To make your resolutions work, you need to plan them wisely. (教材 p.56 1b)
句型:动词不定式作目的状语
仿写:为了实现我的梦想,我打算从现在起努力学习。
To make my dream come true, I'm going to study hard from now on.
连句成篇
My Dream Job
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I want to be a teacher because I think teachers are very important people in our life. They help us with our studies. They give us confidence. To make my dream come true, I'm going to study hard from now on and get good grades in my studies. I'm going to study how to teach students at university.
If I become a teacher, I'll try my best to make my lessons interesting. I hope my students will love me.
解析:
【分析】本题是英语写作题,要求以“My Dream Job”为题写短文,需遵循思维导图的结构(开头点题、主体阐述原因与实现方法、结尾表达愿望),结合提示的三个问题,使用第一人称,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时,运用给定的词块与句型,做到条理清晰、语法正确、符合字数要求。解题时先确定核心内容:理想职业是教师,主体说明原因(教师的重要性),再说明实现计划(努力学习、大学学教学),最后表达愿望。
【解析】按照写作结构分步完成:1. 开头点题:用句型“I want to be a teacher when I grow up.”点明理想职业;2. 主体讲原因:说明教师的重要性(帮助学生、给予信心);3. 主体讲实现方法:用不定式作目的状语的句型说明为实现梦想要努力学习,大学学习教学方法;4. 结尾表达愿望:希望成为让学生喜欢的好老师,注意语句通顺,符合字数要求。
【答案】My Dream Job
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I want to be a teacher because I think teachers are very important people in our life. They help us with our studies. They give us confidence. To make my dream come true, I'm going to study hard from now on and get good grades in my studies. I'm going to study how to teach students at university.
If I become a teacher, I'll try my best to make my lessons interesting. I hope my students will love me.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,一般现在时与一般将来时,理想职业表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力,要求围绕理想职业展开,结构清晰,符合中学生的写作要求,能锻炼学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5