八、书面表达(25分)
假如昨天你收到了一封笔友的邮件,根据邮件内容和自身情况,用英语写一封100词左右的回信。(所给内容不计入总词数)
New Mail
From: KaceLondon@137.com
Time: 8:00 p.m., November 15, 2025
To: LuLuSuzhou@137.com
Dear Lulu,
It’s been long since I last heard from you.
How’s your life in Grade 8? How do you get along with your classmates and teachers?
You said you were interested in hands-on activities last time. Any successful experience?
How’s your schoolwork? As a Grade 8 learner, how do you improve your study? I find it’s hard to pay attention to my schoolwork. Any suggestion to me?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Dear Kace,
It’s great to hear from you!
My life in Grade 8 is busy but interesting as well. I get along well with my classmates and teachers because they're all very kind and friendly.
Speaking of hands-on activities, I had an exciting experience last month when I helped my mum put in a light in her study. It felt great to finish the task by myself.
This year, I learn to make study plans beforehand and take notes carefully. These habits really help me improve my schoolwork a lot.
If you have trouble focusing, here's my suggestion: Don't check your smartphone from time to time while studying.
Also, try to find out the reason for your problem. Maybe you just need more short breaks?
I’m really looking forward to your next letter.
Yours sincerely,
Lulu
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题,需回笔友Kace的邮件,需覆盖对方提出的四个核心问题:八年级的生活状态、与同学和老师的相处情况、动手活动的成功经历、自身学业情况及给Kace关于专注学习的建议,同时要符合书信格式,词数约100,语气需亲切自然,符合笔友间的交流语境。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行:1. 开头呼应来信,表达收到邮件的愉悦;2. 依次回应问题:①说明八年级生活忙但有趣,与师生相处融洽;②分享动手活动的成功经历(帮妈妈安装书房的灯);③介绍自身的学习方法(提前制定计划、认真记笔记),并给Kace提专注学习的建议(学习时不频繁查看手机、查找问题原因、适当休息);3. 结尾表达期待对方回信,完成书信结构。
【答案】
My life in Grade 8 is busy but interesting as well. I get along well with my classmates and teachers because they're all very kind and friendly.
Speaking of hands-on activities, I had an exciting experience last month when I helped my mum put in a light in her study. It felt great to finish the task by myself.
This year, I learn to make study plans beforehand and take notes carefully. These habits really help me improve my schoolwork a lot. If you have trouble focusing, here's my suggestion: Don't check your smartphone from time to time while studying. Also, try to find out the reason for your problem. Maybe you just need more short breaks?
【知识点】
英语书信写作、校园话题表达、学习建议阐述
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书信写作能力,要求围绕指定话题回应笔友的问题,语言需通顺自然,符合交际语境,是初中阶段常见的书面表达题型,能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6