五、书面表达
生活中，总有这样一位榜样：在你迷茫时指引方向，在你消沉时给予鼓励……那么，谁是你心中的榜样？假如你是李华，请结合下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享榜样带给你的力量。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. Introduce the role model and his/her achievements.
2. Share his/her influence on you.
Dear teachers and classmates，
I’m Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—
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That’s all. Thank you.
答案：Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
解析：
【分析】首先确定合适的榜样人物，海伦·凯勒是经典且易展开写作的榜样；接着按照提示要求，先介绍她的遭遇（因病失聪失明）与成就（凭借坚强意志学习，成为著名作家，作品鼓舞他人）；再结合自身，说明她对自己的影响（教会积极面对困难），同时注意演讲稿的语气，控制词数在100左右，保证内容衔接自然。
【解析】1. 补全榜样：确定为Helen Keller；2. 介绍经历与成就：简述她的不幸遭遇，突出其坚强意志与取得的成就，提及代表作《假如给我三天光明》；3. 阐述影响：结合自身，说明她教会自己积极面对挫折，遇到困难时会以她为榜样坚持下去；4. 确保内容符合演讲稿格式，衔接连贯，词数达标。
【答案】Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目提示，内容完整，情感真挚，符合演讲稿的文体要求，语言流畅自然，准确传达了榜样的力量，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
