2026年英语听读空间八年级英语上册译林版提高版第133页解析答案——零五网—

（一）写作任务
学校 DIY 俱乐部正在开展 DIY 作品比赛。假如你是李华,请根据提示要求,用英语将你上周日为妈妈亲手制作生日礼物的经历写成一篇短文,向俱乐部投稿。
1. DIY 的原因;
2. DIY 的过程及感受;
3. 结果。
（二）写作语料
1. I decide to decorate...
2. I made a mistake when I...
3. ... helped me with the work.
4. We had fun working together.
5. Everything was fine.
6. I felt so glad because...
（三）谋篇布局
Part 1:起因
my mum's birthday；make her a music box
Part 2:过程
preparing a small box, tape and some other materials；something is wrong；buy a rose and stick it
Part 3:结果
open the music box；hear the birthday song；deeply moved
（四）习作欣赏
It was my mum's birthday last Sunday. I decided to make her a music box as a surprise.
After preparing a small box, tape and some other materials, I began to make it. It took me over three hours to finish it. When I was making the music box, something went wrong. I was so careless as to make the cover untidy, so I had to buy a rose and stick it on the cover.
After opening the music box, Mum heard the birthday song. It was my first time to make a present for Mum by myself. Mum was happy, and I was even happier.
（五）我的习作

答案：Last Sunday was my mum's birthday. I didn't want to buy an ordinary present from the store, so I decided to decorate a music box for her as a special surprise.
I prepared a small wooden box, tape and some other materials first, and then began to make the gift. I made a mistake when I coloured the box cover, and the surface became very untidy. Luckily, my cousin helped me with the work. We went to the shop nearby and bought a pretty cloth rose, then stuck it on the messy cover. We had fun working together for nearly two hours, and finally everything was fine.
When Mum opened the music box, the soft birthday song came out at once. She was so deeply moved and held my arms happily. I felt so glad because I made the warmest birthday present for my mum all by myself.

解析：

这是译林版八年级上册DIY主题的记叙文写作题，要求以李华的身份投稿，写作注意要点：1. 整体使用一般过去时、第一人称叙事，符合时态要求；2. 内容完整覆盖DIY的原因、制作过程与感受、最终结果三个指定部分，合理融入题目给出的提示语料，按照起因-经过-结果的逻辑展开，表达符合八年级学生的英语水平即可。