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五、书面表达。
(一)
随着科技的发展,人们的生活发生了很大变化。请以“Changes in our life”为题,写一篇英语小短文,谈谈你眼中的生活变化,不少于5句话。
句型提示:Before ... Now ... In the future ...
Changes in our life
Our life has changed a lot.

Before, we went out by bike or on foot. Now we can drive cars or take the bus.

Before, we bought things in shops and paid in cash. Now we shop online and pay on our smartphones.

Before, we wrote letters. Now we can chat on the internet. In the future, our life will be more convenient.

(二)
请根据思维导图,以“My last National Day holiday”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语句连贯,注意时态,书写规范;2. 不少于6句话。

My last National Day holiday
I went to Beijing for the last National Day holiday. The weather was sunny.

I visited the Great Wall with my parents. We took many photos there.

We visited the Summer Palace too. There were many people there.

I had a good time.

答案:Possible versions:
(一) Changes in our life
Our life has changed a lot.
Before, we went out by bike or on foot. Now we can drive cars or take the bus.
Before, we bought things in shops and paid in cash. Now we shop online and pay on our smartphones.
Before, we wrote letters. Now we can chat on the internet.
In the future, our life will be more convenient.
(二) My last National Day holiday
I went to Beijing for the last National Day holiday. The weather was sunny. I visited the Great Wall with my parents. We took many photos there. We visited the Summer Palace too. There were many people there. I had a good time.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,分为两部分。第一部分要求以“Changes in our life”为题,运用Before...Now...In the future...句型描述生活变化,需注意不同时态的正确使用,不少于5句话;第二部分要求结合思维导图(包含天气、去向、活动、感受),以“My last National Day holiday”为题写作,需用一般过去时,语句连贯,不少于6句话。解题时,第一部分先总述生活变化,再对比过去与现在的生活细节,最后展望未来;第二部分围绕思维导图的四个要点展开,依次说明假期的去向、天气、做的事和感受,确保内容完整连贯。
【解析】第一部分写作:1. 总起句说明生活变化大;2. 用Before和Now对比出行方式;3. 对比购物方式;4. 对比通讯方式;5. 展望未来生活,符合句型和句数要求。第二部分写作:1. 点明假期去向;2. 描述天气;3. 说明做的活动(如参观景点);4. 补充活动细节(如拍照);5. 增加其他活动;6. 表达感受,结合思维导图所有要点,时态为一般过去时,满足要求。
【答案】(一) Changes in our life
Our life has changed a lot.
Before, we went out by bike or on foot. Now we can drive cars or take the bus.
Before, we bought things in shops and paid in cash. Now we shop online and pay on our smartphones.
Before, we wrote letters. Now we can chat on the internet.
In the future, our life will be more convenient.
(二) My last National Day holiday
I went to Beijing for the last National Day holiday. The weather was sunny. I visited the Great Wall with my parents. We took many photos there. We visited the Summer Palace too. There were many people there. I had a good time.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生能运用指定句型描述生活变化,结合思维导图组织假期内容,注重时态的正确运用和语句连贯性,属于基础英语写作题型,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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