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八、书面表达。(共 10 分)
请以“A trip to Hangzhou”为题,写一篇短文,90 词左右,需包含以下要点:
1. 上周六我和我的父母去杭州旅游,一大清早就动身去车站,花了两个半小时乘长途汽车到那儿;2. 第一天,我们游览了风景名胜,忍不住拍了许多照片;第二天,品尝了当地美食;第三天……(自拟)3. 感受:……(自拟)
A trip to Hangzhou










答案:One possible version:
A trip to Hangzhou
Last Saturday, my parents and I had a trip to Hangzhou. We left for the station early in the morning. It took us two and a half hours to get there by coach.
On the first day, we enjoyed the places of interest. We couldn't stop taking many photos. On the second day, we enjoyed some delicious local food. On the third day, we bought some presents for our relatives. We had a good time.
Many changes have taken place in Hangzhou. Now it is a smart and eco-friendly city. I will visit it again some day.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先第一步先审题:明确文体是游记类记叙文,核心时态用一般过去时,以第一人称叙事,词数控制在90词左右。接下来先把题干给出的所有硬性要求的要点全部梳理出来,先把“上周六和父母去杭州、清晨去车站、坐长途车花两个半小时”“前两天游览名胜拍照片、品尝当地美食”这些给定内容先预留好位置,之后补充符合旅行场景的第三天合理行程,再补充贴合主题的个人感受,最后用课内学过的基础短语和句型把内容串联起来,按时间先后排布逻辑,就能写出符合要求的短文。
【解析】
行文可以按照三步搭建结构:
1. 开篇交代出行背景:直接点明上周六和父母一同前往杭州旅行,补充清晨动身去车站、乘坐长途汽车花费两个半小时的细节,完成第一个要点的全部表述。
2. 主体按时间顺序写行程:先写第一天游览风景名胜、忍不住拍了很多照片,再写第二天品尝当地特色美食,补充符合旅行逻辑的第三天情节,比如给亲戚朋友挑选伴手礼,完成第二个要点的全部内容。
3. 结尾补充个人感受:写出对杭州城市变化的正面印象,表达未来想要再次到访的意愿,收尾自然,全文保证时态统一、没有语法错误,要点无遗漏。
【答案】
A trip to Hangzhou
Last Saturday, my parents and I had a trip to Hangzhou. We left for the station early in the morning. It took us two and a half hours to get there by coach.
On the first day, we enjoyed the places of interest. We couldn't stop taking many photos. On the second day, we enjoyed some delicious local food. On the third day, we bought some presents for our relatives. We had a good time.
Many changes have taken place in Hangzhou. Now it is a smart and eco-friendly city. I will visit it again some day.
【知识点】
游记写作,一般过去时,固定句型应用
【点评】
这篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的所有提示要点,补充的行程和感受完全符合旅行的真实逻辑,叙事脉络清晰,用到了It takes sb some time to do sth、places of interest等初中核心短语和句型,语法准确,词数符合要求,是非常典型的合格考场范文,学生可以参考它“出行背景-行程展开-个人感受”的三段式游记结构,完成同类半开放提示作文,避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.7
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