八、书面表达。（共 10 分）
假设你已阅读 Lewis Carroll 的小说《爱丽丝梦游仙境》（*Alice's Adventures in Wonderland*），请根据以下要求完成一篇英语读书报告，词数 80～100，已给出部分不计入总词数。
要求：1. 概括故事主线，突出“偶遇白兔→坠入兔洞→奇幻经历”的核心情节；
2. 表达个人观点：说明喜欢这本书的原因，结合人物特点或情节谈 1～2 点收获。
My reading journal
Title：*Alice's Adventures in Wonderland*
Writer：Lewis Carroll
Type：Fiction
When to start：8 November，2025
When to finish：18 November，2025
Main characters：
Alice：A curious，smart and adventurous girl.
The White Rabbit：A hurried rabbit with a pocket watch.
The Cheshire Cat（柴郡猫）：A mysterious cat that can appear and disappear.
The Mad Hatter：A hatmaker who hosts a mad tea party.
The Queen of Hearts：A quick-tempered queen who often says，“Off with their heads!”
Summary：
My opinion：
答案：One possible version:
My reading journal
Title: Alice's Adventures in Wonderland
Writer: Lewis Carroll
Type: Fiction
When to start: 8 November, 2025
When to finish: 18 November, 2025
Main characters:
Alice: A curious, smart and adventurous girl.
The White Rabbit: A hurried rabbit with a pocket watch.
The Cheshire Cat: A mysterious cat that can appear and disappear.
The Mad Hatter: A hatmaker who hosts a mad tea party.
The Queen of Hearts: A quick-tempered queen who often says, "Off with their heads!"
Summary:
The book follows a story full of fantasy and adventure. One day, while reading by a river, Alice sees a White Rabbit in a waistcoat and follows it down a rabbit hole. She enters a strange underground world where she meets odd creatures, attends a mad tea party, and goes to a strange trial.
My opinion:
I really enjoy this book because it is full of imagination and humour. I love Alice best—she is smart, brave, and always finds a way out of trouble. The story teaches us to stay curious and brave, even when we face the unknown, and to trust our own judgment.
解析：
【分析】
这道题要求完成指定小说的英语读书报告，分为情节概括和个人观点两个模块。首先处理Summary部分：第一步先明确必须覆盖的三个核心情节要素“偶遇白兔→坠入兔洞→奇幻经历”，按照故事发展的时间顺序串联内容，先总述故事的奇幻冒险属性，再依次写爱丽丝偶遇揣着怀表的白兔、跟随白兔掉进兔洞、在地下世界遇到各类奇特角色完成一系列奇遇，不要额外添加无关冗余情节。之后处理My opinion部分：选择1-2个贴合人物/情节的切入点，比如结合爱丽丝勇敢好奇的人设，说明喜爱本书的原因是充满想象力，再输出对应的成长收获，最后整体调整语句，控制总词数在80-100区间，保证表达通顺无语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 情节概括（Summary）部分写作：
首先开篇点明故事属于奇幻冒险类作品，随后按照时间线依次串联核心情节：先交代爱丽丝在河边看书时偶遇穿背心、带怀表的白兔，接着写她跟随白兔不慎坠入兔洞，最后写她进入奇特的地下世界，接连遇到各类怪异生物、参加疯茶会、卷入离奇审判，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心情节节点。
2. 个人观点（My opinion）部分写作：
先点明喜爱本书的核心原因是内容充满想象力和趣味性，再结合给定的爱丽丝“好奇、勇敢、爱冒险”的人物特点，输出对应的阅读收获：哪怕面对未知也要保持好奇心和勇气，坚持独立判断，符合题目的观点输出要求，调整语句让表达流畅自然，控制总词数符合80~100的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Summary:
The book follows a story full of fantasy and adventure. One day, while reading by a river, Alice sees a White Rabbit in a waistcoat and follows it down a rabbit hole. She enters a strange underground world where she meets odd creatures, attends a mad tea party, and goes to a strange trial.
My opinion:
I really enjoy this book because it is full of imagination and humour. I love Alice best—she is smart, brave, and always finds a way out of trouble. The story teaches us to stay curious and brave, even when we face the unknown, and to trust our own judgment.
【知识点】
英语读书报告写作，记叙文情节概括，观点表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的应用文写作题型，明确限定了核心情节要素，大幅降低了跑题概率，既考查学生对指定故事内容的梳理概括能力，也考查学生结合文本输出个人感悟的语言组织能力，写作时只要不遗漏要求的核心情节点，观点贴合人物特质、语句通顺即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
